Here is where you should put your hook. Perhaps you could use a quote from someone you admire. In between your hook and thesis statement, you need to connect your thoughts with a bridge. Use a transitional phrase to connect these sentences. I strive to become a meaningful member of NHS because of my dependable nature, ability to lead effectively, and the essence of my morals. This topic sentence needs to reflect your first reason in your thesis statement (dependable nature). 2 years ago I was diagnosed with epilepsy, a disorder that I couldn’t wish away, but it would become a constant battle to finally win my life back. I used to be doubtful and selfish and by being held back physically and developmentally, I was able to learn valuable
1.1 Explain how and why person centered values must influence all aspects of health and social care work:
“Explain how the application of relevant principles and values will enable professionals to provide holistic support for individuals who use social services.” (P1)
Be sure to begin with a strong hook and include a thesis statement that lays out your main argument, supporting details, and a good conclusion.
Thesis Statement: Enter the thesis statement in the space below. Remember to enclose this within quotation marks and provide a citation with the author and
2) An explanation of it is important for why social care workers to work in a way that promotes person centred values.
1.1 Explain how and why person centred values must influence all aspects of health and social care work.
[Hook] Here is where a hook would go. [Transition/ Background] Many people think that college is the only surefire way to be successful in life. Others believe that it is a waste of time or that it is not necessary for everyone. Whatever the stance people have strong opinions on whether or not you should go to college. [Thesis] A four year college degree is not the best investment towards a successful career because it costs a lot of money and there are better alternatives.
Persuasion is a key focus in many essays, stories, commercials, and other forms of media. There are many methods to this, one of which is rhetorical devices. Bell hooks, the author of Feminism is for Everybody, writes to persuade the reader to her own cause: feminism. She uses rhetorical devices, which can be used to persuade—or dissuade—readers in comparison to the writer’s own point of view.
1. Explain how and why person-centred values must influence all aspects of health and social work
As my ninth-grade English teacher, Mrs. Newton would say, without a good hook to start your essay, no one will ever read it. As I was taught, a hook is a crucial part in your essay because it will help grab the audience’s attention so that they will continue to be invested throughout the paper. For example, the hook could be a question or a quote about the overall topic of your essay. In my junior year, we had to do a controversial essay and I used a quote from a famous tattoo artist as my hook because I did my essay over tattoos and piercings. After the hook, the introduction begins to take form and show the audience what your essay is about. The introduction is the first thing in your essay that will tell the audience what the essay is about. The introduction paragraph should be as interesting as the initial hook and keep the audience invested in the paper. It will establish the basis of the essay and should contain the thesis statement. The thesis statement is the point in your essay where you will state the topics that the essay will contain. In high school, we were taught that the thesis should contain the three points that you will elaborate upon in your three body paragraphs: the weakest point, the middle point, and the strongest point.
I am not a feminist simply because I was raised in a feminist household. I am not a feminist because I am an independent, educated woman. I am not a feminist because I am a bitter female, nor because I am a “woman scorned.” I am not a feminist because I hate men, nor because I am a lesbian nor because I like to listen to the Indigo Girls. To the contrary I love men and I am not a lesbian. While I agree with hooks that “feminism is a movement to end sexism, sexist exploitation, and oppression” (viii), I believe that her definition of “feminism” states the goals of the movement rather than actually defining the term itself. In my mind, feminism is a synonym for equality. I am a feminist
2. Explain how and why person-centred values must influence all aspects of social care work (1.1.2)
As I mentioned earlier, David writes about how education can change the social behavior of people and have them connect better, as said by Lewis. He says “...an acquaintance with the literature, both sacred and secular, that forms a culture’s legacy and its sense of community” (Downing, pg. 2). He is saying that this view of education and purpose is a moral component for people in communities to stand firm and connect with each other (Downing). This is the main point in bell hooks' text Keeping Close to Home. She says the most powerful resource to study and teach in a school setting is to understand and appreciate the beauty and richness of our family and community backgrounds (hooks). Communities will connect better and diversity needs will
A weakness that may come from working as a nurse for so long is to become unbalanced, hardened, or impersonal in my personal views because of negative experiences that I may experience as a nurse. Examples of this would be when we work shorthanded or a favorite patient dies. I want to remain an individual nurse with my own individual thoughts and feelings for my patients and his or her individual situation. I do not want to treat everyone the same. I want to remain positive and enthusiastic and not allow experiences with personal or professional practices to take away from the rewards of my job as a nurse.
Third but not least, the conclusion provides an almost mirror image of the introduction, wrapping up the arguments with a restatement of the thesis of your essay. I call this the bottom burger bun or in other words the conclusion. Holding it all together is the bottom bun of the hamburger or the conclusion to sum up all the key points of interest. The conclusion sentence should be interesting by giving it a call to action. As you can see a hamburger is easy to make like writing is not as hard as you think. Writing is very simple to do as preparing a hamburger.