This Boy's Life Thesis

6. It is Jack’s lack of a stable, male role model that is to blame for his actions. To what extent do you agree?

Within the memoirs of “This Boy’s Life, “The Other Wes Moore” and “Those Winter Sunday’s, the fathers in the first two stories were abusive to their wives. The mothers were somewhat tolerant at first then decided to find a better way of living for both herself and her child. In the third story, there was only a father, so the parent in that story was portrayed differently. The mothers in the first two stories grew up differently. The first mother was born and raised in the U.S and the second mother was born in Jamaica and came to the U.S at age 3. Although both mothers had different upbringings, and were parents during different times, their values were the same. It was important for them to show their child(ren) right from wrong. It was also

I thought the topic of society’s speed was very interesting as I had already noticed evidence that society’s speed has an effect in our society today prior to reading the novel. When I originally wrote my essay I wrote it with a theme and general idea of what I wanted to make it about, but not with a super specific thesis. At the end of my introduction paragraph I inserted “Bradbury's use of describing society’s speed should concern us” - a very vague idea of a thesis. I also put this statement at the beginning of my conclusion paragraph, to remind myself to restate it later. After writing my essay, I went back and wrote down a short summary of what I had written in the essay (similar to reverse outlining). I tried to redraft a thesis statement that

Hello Roberto, it was a pleasure to review your reader response, which I really enjoyed reading. I agree with your assessment of the novel and how the author used the different points to draw the reader in at the beginning of the novel. I also agree with the point you brought out in the confrontation of how we at times, take things for granted, and how it is not until we look back on our past, that we truly begin to appreciate all that we thought was petty or insignificant. Your thesis statement is very clear, straight, and to the point. Throughout your paper, there was also sufficient evidence to back up each point that you intended to make, although I think it would have helped to further explain the quote and how it ties in with your thesis

I think the theme of the text is that taking a chance could be rewarding.Like it the passage the boys life the boy dose the last day of school and he find out at the end of class.that his teacher whanted to talk to him so the teacher talk to him and said that he sould really join the writing club the teacher said.He didint take thee offer and ended out not going.

My thoughts on the first draft would be right in the opening sentence so much information is being thrown at me. The sentence is a run on and should be split into two different sentences. The start of the first paragraph needs to have a better attention grabber. There also needs to be more transitional words between paragraph. The opening sentence in each paragraph is the same it starts with “In…” The thesis could be stronger in the opening paragraph. It was very hard to fine because there was so much information in there. The order of the paragraphs could be placed differently and the information in them. The grammar needs to be worked on there are a few comma splices throughout the paper. The ending of the sentences need to have a stronger

I am quite impressed with the structure of your concluding paragraph. After re-stating your initial thesis, you provided strong details to substantiate your viewpoint. Furthermore, the flow of your concluding paragraph allowed each detail to build upon the next. As a result, I found this to be an excellent build up to your clincher sentence. In conclusion, I feel that making your clincher sentence a question was an effective way to impact your reader by shifting the responsibility to the reader to find a solution to the problem.

I can relate to you changing your thesis statement several times. In fact I have done some myself. I think that you have made the right choice. It’s better to go over it in your head and paper over and over until you get it right.

I found your paper interesting and agree to that life experiences are also important. As a healthcare professional, I have worked with people from all educational level and found that the highest education and best performance does not go hand in hand. An example would be a registered nurse with Masters degree, who needs to call the Vocational nurse without a degree to insert an IV catheter. Conversely, education is also important. Between the same nurses, the one with Masters might recognize a patient crises when it comes to electrolyte imbalance and notifies the physician in a timely

I had a thesis sentence. It should have been clear and concise. I do believe that the way that I presented it, however, may not have been the best way possible. It may have seemed to some as more of just another sentence in the introduction rather than a thesis statement. This could be fixed by using more

The most important thing to remember about a thesis statement is it gives the reader your opinion and you are entitled to your opinion. You are also giving the reader a new article to read and allow them to give feedback if necessary. This isn 't new to me, for I 've done a thesis statement before and received good feedback from fellow classmates. What 's different is all of us were focused on once topic and had to come up with our own thesis on that assigned topic. It worked out well.

Growing up, my life was never really considered easy. I had a mom in and out of drugs and a dad who was never there. It was always my brother and me against the world. Then 6th grade came and that school year is when my whole life changed just from one snapchat. That 10-second photo of a brown-eyed boy with dark fringed hair and a smile that lit the room up had me falling head over heels. As we started talking and getting to know each other was when I later found out he was 583 miles away at that moment I thought all hope was lost. Turns out that wasn’t the only downside he also had a girlfriend. Later that week he snapchatted me again asking for my number and at the moment nothing else was going through my head other than I was in shocked that a guy like him wanted to talk to someone like me. We talked every day and I fell more for him every day. Time went by so fast before I knew it a month went by and the words I love you Kayla came across my phone screen. My heart started racing and I knew this was crazy there was no way you could love someone at 13 or someone who was hundreds of miles away but, those words put a kind of happiness in my heart that I never felt before. A couple days after that amazing moment he broke up with his girlfriend and you can guess what happened after that I was his new girlfriend. We would always talk about our future and the day we would finally meet. Instead of babe or baby, he would call me sweet and I’d call him love which to us wasn’t

I took it upon myself to go to the school to reenroll but the school said that I could not because I would be too old for my graduating class. I told them I did not care how old I would be, I just wanted my education. They said the best thing for me to do was go to an alternative school or go get my GED. Before I was 18, I was married an out of the house. I did not feel like I was being like a kid but like an adult. So what did I do? I got married at 17 years old. We were only together for a month. I found out that he was cheating on me with my best friend at the time. I left and went back home to be treated like a very young adult. In 1992, I became a free woman, had achieved my GED. I proved to myself that I could do it and then some. After that, I picked up a few hobbies that I had come to realize how it helped to relieve stress.

And I have to say about the thesis . Thesis statement structure was not familiar to me. But I found that thesis mastatement made a convenient structure of the paper to understand for the readers, also not to wander out of the topic for the writers. In spite of, I felt that It seemed me to tie in the structure mechanically. So I was very struggled to follow instruction to write the thesis

It is two-thirty in the morning, and Alex is still awake in his hotel room. The excitement of the events today are too thrilling and stressful to get sleep. Today Alex is playing in the Professional Disc Golf Associations Amateur World Championship in St. Paul, Minnesota. His friends and family know that Alex is an amazing player and a connoisseur when disc golf is mentioned. Alex gets into arguments a lot because he takes umbrage to anyone who tells him it takes no skill or that disc golf is not a sport. Now it is four in the morning, and it is time for him to get up and get ready for the biggest tournament of his life. Brushing his teeth (Gerund) is always the first thing he does every morning. Feeling nervous