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Tim O 'Brien's Holiday, I Love You'

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Tim O'Brien's short story How To Tell a True War Story explores themes of storytelling itself through the blending of reality — or the illusion to reality — and fiction and develops an authentic character’s voice. In Holiday, I Love You by Laura Jean Mackay the protagonists thoughts and feelings are expressed through metaphor and combine to create an open and intriguing conclusion. Although Mackay employs an omniscient third person narrator in Holiday, I love you, the characters, particularly that of the Sokha, are constructed through the narrating imagery and metaphor. When the narrator related that “the buzz from the factory entered Sokha’s fingers and rattled up her spine to her skull until her thoughts were just thread pushed through needle and woven into yellow” the reader is given an image of the way the factory …show more content…

The image alludes to the physical nature of the work and the all-over body exhaustion that comes from it. The word choice also conjures impressions of a fragmentation and confinement, being split into “thread” and “pushed through a needle” by the repetitious sewing (Mackay, 31). This all combines to create an impression of the environment that Sokha has to work in as well as her mindset. Similarly, in the conclusion Mackay uses metaphor to convey Sokhas’s reaction upon realising that Mr Polin — a figure of stability in her life — has been killed. The ants crawling over Sokha’s body and eyes is used to metaphorically relate the feeling of being consumed by grief, the rising body of black ants mirroring the inner feelings of welling despair and sadness. This metaphor combines with the abruptness of the ending creates, not an open ending, but a conclusion that leaves the characters stories unfinished and open.

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