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Cover Sheet For Police Brutality

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Abby Boyce
English 1201
Professor McGehee
10/22/2012
Cover Sheet
a) Who is your audience?
My audience applies to everyone in the US. My audience is very broad because my topic touches base on an issue that can or could potentially affect anyone directly or indirectly as well.
b) How would you like your readers to describe the personality you present on the page?
My personality is confident. I believe in my argument and feel strongly about it.
c) What question does your paper answer?
It answers the question as to whether or not there is an issue with police brutality. d) What’s your thesis/claim?
Something needs to be done immediately to end the violence and inappropriate discipline being inflicted on our citizens. The harsh …show more content…

Backing Questions:
What is my backing?
- Cops must complete a two year degree before they can be a certified officer.
- It’s still a big problem because people are not bringing enough attention to it for it to be recognized.
Does my backing apply in all cases? Why or why not?
Yes. My backing is aimed to back-up my warrants to the best of my ability.

Abby Boyce
English 1201
Professor McGehee
10/22/2012
Formal Outline I. “In the middle of broad daylight, August 28th, 2012, laid a man helpless and defenseless after being kicked, beat, and sprayed repeatedly with a chemical irritant.” a. Refer to StarTribune article and discuss background/situation that happened b. Claim: Something needs to be done immediately to end the violence and inappropriate discipline being inflicted on our citizens. The harsh discipline we are discovering is being used more and more often should not be tolerated. II. Cops, especially street cops, are supposed to be the role-models of the community and are hired to benefit the community, not harm it. a. Grounds: Give statistics from St. Paul homicide ratings b. Grounds: Define police brutality c. Grounds: Use quote from the StarTribune III. Warrant: To believe there is an issue with the criminal justice system, you must recognize the problem as well as believe that cops are not trained to inflict physical abuse on citizens, they are trained to

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