Tyler's Sacrifice?-Personal Narrative

“What is this?” He asked Hector slowly, examining his hand with the new piece of jewelry attached to it “what does it do?”

“You can have it,” he says. I smiled, I was so excited! I never thought he would give it to me. “Really?!” I ask. He started to look through more of his old things and took out some things and put them off to the side and I also looked through those boxes.

Tyler and Sally were in their neighborhood park when Markus Watson ran up to them say. “Sam Cronk and Jim Davis are dead, one was stabbed and the other we believe was forced or volunteered to drink a vial of poison. The weird part is that Sam Cronk had his fingerprints on both of the items used to kill them.”

Inside the sewers, we found the pandaman. Tyler started to kill him with a banana that he had found half rotten on the sewer floor, but the panda man took off his mask, revealing the hair and body tan that could only belong to a rad surfer dude who rides rad sewer waves. He introduced himself as Hurley, and explained that he was sent by, “Party Peeps inc.” (His part-time job) to dress like a panda to wish, “Andy boi” a very “Pandalicious” birthday, but while he was talking, he would randomly say things like “radical dude,” and “that’s gnarly!”

“I brought a few things with me from the bedroom,” he explained conversationally, as if he wasn't slowly curling a finger into Cloud at that exact moment. “I thought they might come in handy.”

“What? So he and his mother weren’t there?” He said, thoroughly confused. He set down the half read paper.

Tyler was walking along calm, cool, and collective in the desert and saw ten guys huddling around a campfire not too far from a train. The guys looked and saw Tyler coming as he was minding his own business. They saw him wearing: sandals, blue and white jersey shorts, and a white tang top, with two grey dog tags around my white neck and having my name printed in them saying “Tyler Fluit.” They also saw how ripped I was on body structure too, with my dirty blonde hair and gleaming bluish green eyes.

“I don’t know. All we were told is that this is a large raid and we would find out when we got here,” replied an FBI agent, shrugging his shoulders.

“So? The Wolfowitz live over sixty miles from us, there is no we are in any danger.”

“Right, that info was doubled checked by Preston himself using that CRV trance-like state stuff to determine if anything was there.”

“Nice, but a strange old man, too” he thought. “I wonder what questions he thinks I might have about the house?”

To start off, during the story, I did believe the locket was stolen or lost. Is because one of the men were to curious about. The man said, "What's that you got around your neck, Ned." Saying it in suspenseful way

Tyler hopped in the taxi surging with excitement. This was the first time his basketball team made it to the finals. Quotation marks the crowded stands and screaming fans…,” Tyler imagined.

“A lot of it’s already packed up” he admitted “But, I do have something of your mother’s that she’d like you to have. He began looking around the hall, presumably searching for this box of memorabilia. “I think it’s in the garage.” he said before scurrying out of the room.

Placing the stone in my pocket, I returned back to my room where Margaret and Max were still conversing. “Did you find anything of significance?”, inquired