The air is filled with the smell of burning bodies. It is the winter of 1777, and my condition is getting worse as the days pass. Most of the soldiers here don’t rest that much so everyday they look weary. The winter at Valley Forge started on December 19, 1777 in Pennsylvania. The question I ask myself everyday is if I have served my 9 months should I reenlist or leave? I have decided to not re-enlist for three reasons which are smallpox and diseases, bad weather and starvation, and poor medication and treatment. I know that if I don’t re-enlist it could make a huge impact on the soldiers.
The first reason I will not re-enlist is because there are so many diseases spreading at Valley Forge. I overheard George Washington say that they buried
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Everyday I see people laying on the snow life less because they froze to death. This reason is causing me to not re-enlist because I don’t want to freeze to death because I don’t have warm clothes. It's always sad to see children outside with no warm clothes, in the freezing cold weather.
The third reason I will not re-enlist is because there is poor medication and treatment. I see my fellow soldiers with no socks or shoes while they are out fighting the British. This reason is causing me to not re-enlist because I don’t want to get sick because I have no shoes or socks. I also wouldn’t like to die because they can’t give me good medication and treatment. If I get sick I would like to have medicine that works so I can get better faster. I have decided to not re-enlist for three reasons which are which are smallpox and diseases, bad weather conditions, and poor medication and treatment. I don’t want to re-enlist because I have a family and they need me back. My family needs me to take care of them and to be strong for them. Throughout these nine months, I have not gotten in touch with my family so I don’t know if their doing okay. I understand that I have friends that will re-enlist so we can win the war but that still doesn’t change my
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Thousands have already died. The weather is getting unbearable. Beginning in December of 1777, George Washington’s army set up a terrible camp known as Valley Forge hoping to train to continue the fight against the British. The winter of ‘77 was unbearably cold, and the soldiers began to lose hope. If you were a Continental Soldier spending the winter at Valley Forge, would you have left the army? I would have quit at Valley Forge because the conditions were miserable, there was no supplies, and too many soldiers became ill.
In the winter of 1777 and 1778, George Washington commanded several patriots to spend the winter at Valley Forge, and I was one of them. With the hard lodging, cold weather, and vague ventilation the living conditions were not easy. Valley Forge was a military camp 18 miles northwest of Philadelphia during the American Revolutionary War. (Doc A.) Starvation, disease, malnutrition, and exposure killed more than 2,500 American soldiers by February 1777. George Washington desired huts for his men with winter almost setting in. At Valley Forge I quit because of the extreme conditions of the lodging along with illness and death. I also knew that my family needed me back home.
Soldiers walk through the snow, nearly barefoot, leaving bloody footprints behind. This is a picture of the camp at Valley Forge. It was the week before Christmas, 1777, and George Washington’s soldiers were miserable. The bleak winter provided many problems for the soldiers. Outside, it was bitterly cold, but inside the huts that served as shelter, poor ventilation systems led to smoke nearly choking people. In this situation, would you have quit the army, left and no longer participated in the fight for freedom, or would you have stuck it out? I have decided to not re-enlist for two reasons which are the severe lack of resources, and the miserable conditions and spirits of the soldiers.
I am a soldier at Valley Forge, sacrificing myself for my suffering country so that we all can be free from Britain's control. I am in tatter'd clothes and have barely enough food to survive, but I’ll go through this just so my country doesn't have to suffer any more. “The war started on December 1777, me along with the rest of the army camped out at Valley Forge (Roden 141).” “A few young women developed “scarlet fever,” a fascination with British soldiers and their bright red coats (Roden 141).”
This is the worst winter ever. It is winter in Philadelphia, 1777 to 1778 and you are at Valley Forge in miserable brutal conditions. If you were at Valley Forge would you have re-enlisted or gone home? If I was at Valley Forge I would not have re-enlisted because of the harsh conditions and not being supported, lack of supplies, and death and illness.
We now have the help of the help of the Congressional Committee, the conditions will get better after the winter, and there is too much value in this war. My mind has been made up to reenlist because we now have the Congressional Committee to help us. I have made up my mind to stay because I know the conditions will get better in the winter. The decision that I am going to stay was made because there is too much to lose in this war. To re-enlist shows courage, endurance, and strength. There is always a chance, even when it seems impossible. Everyone should try, even in the worst
Death is all around you,what do you do? Valley Forge was a winter camp in 1777 to 1778 for the George Washington and his army. Valley Forge was 18 miles outside of Philadelphia. The winter at Valley Forge was long, cold, harsh, and horrible. Soldiers 9 month terms were about to end many wanted to go home. The question to us is would you re-enlist or not re-enlist? I have decided to re-enlist for three reasons which are less soldiers, hard times, and support. It would not matter to me what happened I,am a loyal soldier.
Hearing gunshots here and there, soldiers fighting for well earned freedom from Britain in the cold, freezing weather at Valley Forge. All I have left when I signed up was a picture of my beloved wife, a notebook to write letters to her when in camp, and what my dying mother gave me when I left was a mini Bible. In 1777-1778 George Washington commanded several thousand patriot soldiers who spent the winter at Valley Forge, which I was one of 12,000 American soldiers that was sent to fight for freedom from the British in Valley Forge. I was placed at Valley Forge, 18 miles Northwest of Philadelphia. I have decided to go to Valley Forge to help fight and win the war against the British , I also signed up because I want to help fight for my country’s independence and for everyone’s freedom to live in a free world.I want to re-enlist for three reasons which are: having pride/glory, teamwork/care, and courage.
On the other hand, some people do not re-enlist or desert because their family or they just don’t want to die. This point of view makes sense because “Victory seemed a long way away.” so men would not keep fighting because they thought the war would be won by the British. However I will reenlist because I believe that we can win the war and I want to provide for my family, Fight for my country, and fight for my freedom. Therefore, I am going to reenlist because there are more reasons to stay than
Another reason I must re-enlist is the fact that my government deserves my loyalty. The Committee of Congress has stayed with us through much of the winter after arriving at Valley Forge a few weeks ago and has given us hope (Document B). That hope has sparked within us a new flood of encouragement and will power. When George Washington was talking to the 5 members of Congress, he expressed the fact that we brave soldiers need help in our battle with Britain (Document B). Even though it’s cold, and we have threadbare clothing that are merely rags, and the Congress members are all dressed in their finest, our spirit is still strong (Document B). Even Dr. Waldo stated that while tending to our sick soldiers, he was surprised by the magnitude of cheerful willingness to proceed with fighting for our cause (Document C). Dr. Waldo expected us to be down on our luck for having to withstand the poor food, fatigue, cold weather, crowded huts, and smoky air quality which was due to poor ventilation, but most soldiers were able to persevere through all of that hardship (Document C). The Committee of Congress makes me feel like someone is listening to our needs. The general supports us and the government cares about us, so I must support my government.
Loud gunshots cold air harsh conditions smoke filled huts this is Valley Forge. Valley Forge is a bunker that was led by by george washington. Should I stay or reenlist. I have decided to quit because death and illness, harsh conditions, and lack of support.
The nine month enlistment is up and i can’t wait to go and see my loved one. The only thing holding me back is the chance of freedom. I am ready to leave get my chance to be home. The lack of support the conditions that are at valley forge the sickness it is harder than you would think to stay away from disease.
People were coughing and sneezing everywhere! Snow covered everything, people were as cold as ice, and no one is guaranteed to survive. It was 1776, George Washington urged us to Philadelphia into a place called Valley Forge. As soon as we stepped onto the soil of Valley Forge we knew, not much were going to survive. But luckily, I was one of them. But now the call of duty is here, but should I re-enlist? The answer is no! No, for the three following reasons, the weather, my chance of survival, and the terrible condition I would be in.
When I enlisted in June 1777 to fight for my country the thought to re-enlist never crossed my mind. I could stay like the many sick soldiers to help fight. I could stay and suffer through the horrible food and leave my aging mother. But I think I know what I must do. My decision is to re-enlist. Some reasons why are to help my country, to keep up the positive attitudes, and to end Britain’s rule.