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Walk Two Moons Character Analysis

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Gian Carlo Obico
Mrs. Scaniffe
6th Honors
March 1, 2017
Internal & External Forces How would you feel if your mother left you and never came back? Then again, how would you feel if your father took you with him out of the blue and moved to a place you were unfamiliar with? Well, those are are only some of the many unfortunate events that occur in Sals life, a young 13 year old girl whose story is littered with internal and external conflicts that she must overcome and accept. In the novel Walk Two Moons, by Sharon Creech, many internal and external forces affect and change the way Sal thinks, feels, and acts. External forces change and affect Sal drastically throughout the story. In a situation where Sal is deciding to go on a road …show more content…

In one paragraph, Sal says, “Several times that day, my mother asked me if I wanted to walk the fields with her. It was drizzling outside, and I was clearing out my desk, and I just did not feel like going. “Maybe later,” I kept saying. When she asked me for about the tenth time, I said, “No! I don’t want to go. Why do you keep asking me?” I don’t know why I did that. I didn't mean anything by it, but it was one of the last memories she had of me, and I wished I could take it back.” (97). This shows how Sal is affected by what she said to her mother in the past. This memory hurts and makes Sal feel guilty about what she said to her mother, therefore, this confirms that internal conflict contributes to the change and transformation of Sals feelings in the story. Internal conflict is just as important as external conflict. Internal conflict reveals the many feelings and thoughts that a character has, in this case, Sal feels guilty about the things she said. However, the only thing that is different is that this change is caused by thoughts and decisions inside of Sal’s head. In addition, Internal conflict also establishes a connection between the Sal and reader, and without internal conflict, the story wouldn't feel as alive as it would be if it had some sort of internal

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