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War In Tim O Brien's The Things They Carried

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“War is hell, but that's not the half of it, because war is also mystery and terror and adventure and courage and discovery and holiness and pity and despair and longing and love. War is nasty; war is fun. War is thrilling; war is drudgery. War makes you a man; war makes you dead.” Tim O’Brien wrote in his novel The Things They Carried. There are many different ways to connect with a reader through pieces of writing. Tim O’Brien captured many readers through his detailed writing and telling of Vietnam War stories throughout the novel The Things They Carried. In the memoir If I Die in a Combat Zone, his writing lacked thorough description and feeling compared to The Things They Carried. Tim O’Brien connects with the reader through his writing …show more content…

“They’d sleep away the daylight hours, or try to sleep, then at dusk they’d put on their gear and move out single file into the dark. Always a heavy cloud cover. No moon and no stars. It was the purest black you could imagine, Sanders said, the kind of clock-stopping black that God must’ve had in mind when he sat down to invent blackness” (O’Brien, The Things They Carried 209). O’Brien painted a scene what it was like living in Vietnam at night. The men seemed scared and lonely and O’Brien really connected with the reader describing what it was like during those times of darkness. “We would seek out shapes in the dark. Impose solidity. We would squeeze our eyes shut. What we could not see we imagined” (O’Brien, If I Die 28). O’Brien uses lots of description in this scene describing what it was like being in the dark for periods of times. But the description doesn’t connect with the reader as much as storytelling. Storytelling makes an experience personal and empathizes over it. This scene showed the effect of darkness on a soldier, but it did not connect with the reader as much as scenes and stories in The Things They Carried. The effect of darkness is one of many scenes that is the same in both writings of Tim O’Brien’s …show more content…

“At daybreak, the platoon of eighteen soldiers formed into a loose rank and began tramping side by side through the deep much of the shit field. They moved slowly in the rain. Leaning forward heads down, they used the butts of their weapons as probes, wading across to the river and then turning and wading back again. They were tired and miserable” (O’Brien, The Things They Carried 155). In this scene of the novel, the men were searching for Kiowa in the shit field. O’Brien describes this field in graphic detail waking up all your senses. He described what it smelled like what it was like searching for your friend that had died. In the novel If I Die in a Combat Zone. “He had been in command for only an hour when he marched the men into a minefield. Then the dust-off helicopters were there, taking away a dead man…” (O’Brien, If I Die 171). This is a similar scene with much less description of the minefield and what it felt like searching for a friend that you know has died. In this scene, O’Brien lacked description so this scene didn’t connect with the reader as much as the scene from The Things They Carried. These major scenes overlap in both O’Brien’s writings about the Vietnam War and the descriptive details he uses in The Things They Carried connected more personally with the reader than in If I Die in a Combat

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