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Year Round School Essay

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GALLAHAN, KAILEE E. "Year-Round School: Possibility for Remediation, Retention." State Journal (WV), vol. 33, no. 26, 31 July 2017, p. 18. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=n5h&AN=124443914&site=ehost-live. Gallahan’s article grants the reader with an article containing the advantages and disadvantages of a year round school. In the beginning of the article Gallahan discusses that year round school is always a debate the moment it is brought up. While the author mentions that the article is about the two different sides of year round school, it is mainly focused on the advantages. For example, “Schools utilizing a year-round calendar are experiencing benefits of remediation and retention as other traditional calendar schools are reaping the benefits of calendar unity and less funding commitment” (Gallahan). This intext citation displays that even though her article addresses the debate, her voice of reason is directed more towards the advantages.
Throughout the article, Gallahan’s writing exercises prove to be informational and formal. The author …show more content…

In the beginning of the article the author starts off with a question of how one will spend their summer to transition into how some children will either spend their summer-break freely or in school. “Summer is around the corner, and you may already be dreaming about how you’ll spend your break. Will you: (a) go to camp, (b) travel with your family, (c) play Minecraft, or (d) stay in school? Chances are, staying in school” (Kelsey). This in text example shows the introduction of the author’s topic and what the article will tell. Kelsey uses a student as an example for her thesis about how some students have to stay in school year round. The author’s essay addresses the pros and cons of year-round schooling. Lastly, the author concludes the article by asking the reader if he or she would change summer

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