Commentary Essay

result of every source at some point essentially expressing the same sentiment: we can only assume what Dinah thought because she never uttered a word. That said, I will both summarize what each commentary says about Dinah, as well as offer some reflection on the commentary itself. The first commentary I read was certainly the most in-depth, technical analysis of Genesis 34. The New Interpreter’s Bible (hereby referenced as NIB) paints a compelling picture of the tale. Interestingly, this was one

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a. Anecdotal Method-Many years ago, in a small town in Michigan, a woman by the name of Janet Adkins was diagnosed with a horrifying illness known as Alzheimer's Disease. Alzheimer's Disease is an illness that causes problems with memory, thinking, and behavior. Very early in the diagnosis, she already believed that her life was over and did not want to deal with the upcoming side effects of the disease. To overcome this, she decided to end her life out of the thought that it would make it easier

that she uses throughout the passage where she characterizes Carol as a self-deceiving, but hardworking woman, and Howard as a cautious man, to provide social commentary through their actions and reasoning to themselves and to others for getting engaged. Gallant’s use of sarcasm establishes narrative voice, and it turn provides social commentary on the shallowness of modern marriages. Gallant states that “From a series of helpful college lectures, she [Carol] learned that a common interest, such as

Nathaniel Hawthorne reveals Hooper’s moral values. Evidence about sunday dinner/from short story Commentary- Minister Hooper knew that his congregation would act this way, but he chose to teach them a greater lesson about judging others rather than trying to keep up his social life. Commentary- Doing this displays Minister Hooper’s moral value, devotion. Evidence about sacrifice/ source B Commentary- This displays that Minister Hooper is willing to give up his social life to persuade his congregation

langauge Commentary since dog communicate that prove they can feel,not only the good but also the bad. Concrete detail If we can not treat dogs and cats right how are we supose to take care of an exotic pet.` Commentary When we are young, our parents give a small organism to take care of to prove we are responable to a plant a rock that we can not lose .Once we show that we are responceable they let us have a more demanding pet. Concrete detail we need to do things like that Commentary If people

The story “The Ones Who Walked Away From Omelas” by Ursula Le Guin, illustrates your perfect, beautiful, happy city of Omelas, however, the happiness of Omelas depends on the suffering of one child. The story of “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut, illustrates a society where everyone is equal in every way. George and Hazel are watching a ballerina show when an announcement is made that their son Harrison had escaped from the government. That is interrupted by Harrison claiming that he is the king

determine just who he was; after all there is no genealogy for him. Various theories suggest who Melchizedek may have been, and all accounts are relatively similar. We will concentrate on three different commentaries to obtain a better understanding of the person of Melchizedek. Matthew Henry’s Commentary starts like most of the other descriptions, making reference to Genesis 14:18, “He was king of Salem and priest of the most high God”. Henry’s

Throughout this semester, I was able to learn quite a bit in English 200. This class helped me recognize what my weaknesses and strengths are when it comes to writing essays. I also liked the different focuses and assignments that we had to do for this class. If someone asked me what is a good writing intensive class to take, I would recommend this class because of the papers that we wrote helped us focus on our disciplines. The only paper that did not really focus on our discipline was the research

plan to start my defense by providing those arguments that claim that it was self-consciousness at Moses’ part rather than a disability. For instance, The Eerdmans' commentary states that “uncircumcised” in the passage has been used as a metaphor of being unfit or unready. Besides this, I will add The International Bible commentary, which has the similar kind of views. It describes that Moses was