Maya script

well-identified protagonist that drives the story. The script opens as if this is James’ story to tell. The first half of the script focuses mainly on James’ and his inner emotional turmoil and struggle

met to film the prototype idea, I was not present. The idea didn’t work, so we ended up scrapping it and choosing a new setting altogether. We knew that we’d need at least a week to film everything, so Sophie and I ended up typing a completely new script without talking over all of the specifics with our group. That week, we started filming, while also making

While Harry and Talman are actively planning, Carlino is in the background awaiting instructions from the two "stronger" characters. At some point during the script, Carlino shows his naiveté as Susy has some fun with him and starts to "con" him. Arriving in Act I Scene II, Gloria, the sweet little girl from upstairs has the job of going to the store for Susy. Gloria's character adds comedy to what will soon

THE REVERSE presents with an interesting idea. The goal is clear and the stakes are high. The script is driven by solid themes about freedom, justice, and destiny. The tone is mainly dark and it presents with as a very disturbing and violent story. While the concept feels thought provoking, the overall script would benefit from more development. First, there’s a solid inciting event when Justin is fired and called a derogatory name. His decision to buy the plantation is the catalyst that moves

spirited, but insecure dressmaker is transported to 1935 Wales, where she becomes the dressmaker for her great-grandmother, and now she must find her way back home. STORY COMMENTS MAGICALLY WED offers a delightful fantasy. The concept is solid. The script presents as a fun and classic fish out of water and coming of age story. The idea of an insecure, but hopeful wedding dress designer from the present being transported back in time to 1935 to become a dressmaker’s assistant to her own great-grandmother

these emotions, the more they gain self-revelation through the jobs. The script ends with character’s personal transformations as Ria and Lila decide to go against their character. Ray and Lila’s actions and decisions result from their transformations through the sequence of the script. However, the film’s resolution is inconclusive. The script begins with Ray searching for her run-away husband, and yet by the end of the script, audiences are unsure what happened to the husband. Character Although

IT AIN’T ME, BABE is a creative and imaginative broad comedy. The concept is fun and a nice setup for comedy, conflict, and character change. The script is driven by the theme of second chances. There’s definitely a lot to like about this script. On the other hand, there are also areas that would benefit from more development. First the script opens rather mildly. The idea that the music store is in jeopardy of being taken over or closed down certainly is workable, but a bit outdated, meaning

story (part 1) setup a strong expectation that this story would be about retrieving information from James’ memory regarding the location of the chip. However, part two feels like an entirely different script. Thus, it would benefit the script to focus on the main storyline set up in the first script. However, part 2 offers more action, which is absent in part one. Both part 1 and part 2 need to be combined, but it needs to focus on ONE main goal. Too many flashbacks confuse the audience. The only

wired to explode if he stands up and in order to survive he must hack his way into a computer mainframe to open a vault for an unseen assailant. STORY COMMENTS HOT SEAT is a well written thriller that fully engages the audience. It’s the type of script in which one feels as if they are watching the film. The plot is similar to the concepts used in SPEED and in the film PHONE BOOTH. In this story, the protagonist finds himself trapped in his office and forced to remain seated in a chair wired by

(on first 30 pages) THE 11th COMMANDMENT is a sci-fi, action-thriller with some dark comedy. The first 30 pages offer an imaginative and visionary future world. The tone blends serious situations with humor. There’s also a “film noir” style to the script, as well as some comic book-like features. The opening sets the tone, although the first four pages feel overly written and could be clearer. What is clear is that the man is after something and/or something is after the man. The introduction of