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During Paragraph A I use Projection, pace, pause, pitch, tone , and breathing. I especially use projection when I say the we all have our own ways in the first sentence with that “we all have our own” you capture the audience's attention I also use it and that well Glory Be let my fingers will never be clean and the kids I ordered to cut. I use pace in the first paragraph when I speed up “some of us look like the innocent" and slow down using my voice to create an American accent when I speak about

editing. In the first draft of this essay, I had the wrong structure because I wrote like a five paragraph essay where I had an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion. For the first draft of my essay, I was supposed to mainly talk about my truths in my life, which I did not have it in my personal essay. However, after going to your office hours I found I was not supposed to write a five paragraph essay, but as a personal story essay about my truths. Then you told me, to “Write about an event

are. You can see the margins, too: the dotted rectangle on the page shows you where they are. Just keep typing and Word will wrap the text within the margins. Don 't press Enter at the end of every line. Press Enter to indicate the end of a paragraph, not the end of a line. Make sure you can see when you have pressed Enter OK: So there 's this big rule that says "don 't press Enter at the end of every line". But, you say, I can 't see whether I 've pressed Enter or not. So what 's the

Again, after the paragraphs describing Dieters dream end, the passage is written in a dreamlike manner. It seems that Bethge mistakes Mrs. Hax for the dancing bear, which is strange because her actions in the first paragraph are nothing like the graceful actions of the bear, and she does not want to “fold him onto the fragrant, brilliant fur” in a warm embrace but rather

would play a much more important role; this is why I chose to take WRTG 101 as my first class returning to school. I began WRTG 101 with unrefined writing skills; now I can properly apply the writing process, construct unified and well supported paragraphs, demonstrate accurate grammar and mechanics, and properly analyze and integrate valid sources using an accepted documentation style. Approaching the initial writing assignment was difficult for me because it had been so long since I had utilized

(Never introduce a new point of explication in the concluding paragraph- first and last paragraphs frame the essay’s explication or argument.)Most student essay writers find that once they have formulated their thesis statement, it is easiest to write the middle paragraph first and the introduction and conclusion last .Edit and proof-read: when you have finished drafting your essay, carefully check the spelling , grammar

Chapter 1 1. The difference between opinion and facts is that an opinion can be used as a topic of an essay. An opinion makes the essay more interesting for the reader. However, facts can not be used as a topic since there will be no one to persuade, making the essay less interesting 2. Facts may not be used as a topic for an essay, but facts do provided the support for an opinion. If an essay does not obtain facts then it would all be base on unproven emotional feeling. Therefore, facts are need

Students will write numerous essays throughout their high school years, and most teachers adapt some form of in-class editing, or peer-editing. Though the problem with this is that poor editors do not just have an effect on their own writing and their own essay, but they affect others, as well. Students do not put as much time or effort into revising as they are required to do. The rough draft is meant to be byzantine, with the understanding that a thorough editor will comb through every sentence

Analyzing an Advertisement Advertising is one of the world's foremost businesses. Companies use this media to communicate their ideas, products and messages to the general public. This is one type of advert, which is used to draw people to donate to a cause. It is called an appeal. This appeal is from Help The Aged, a fairly large charity, dedicated to helping the older and less able people. This particular advert is for the SeniorLink pendant, a small telephone pendant

Sympathy Think & Focus Questions: 1. What is the speaker describing in the first stanza? How does this description help the reader to understand how the caged bird feels? How does the speaker’s identification with the bird’s feelings tell you something about how the speaker feels? The speaker is describing the desperation and loneliness of a caged bird in the first stanza, though in an unconventional way. He describes the beauty and wonder of the circumstance, of the events that are happening