This Voice

Before this semester, my essay writing would have been considered rather poor. This was because I did not understand the various components of a properly written and accompany them to effectively communicate my ideas. I lacked the most in keeping the audience involved hence, catching and maintaining their attention, to my writing from the introduction to the conclusion. To me, writing was more complicated than a speech since a speech involved direct audience who the speaker can gauge their feelings

more times. At this point, perhaps, he realizes his own fault within the situation as he continues to set himself in place for the remainder of part one. The simple sentences in The Stranger reveal Meursault’s emotional detachment from society, while the more complex sentences are assigned to objects with authority. Throughout the entire novel, Meursault’s simplicity and disinterest in the world can be identified with the incorporation of his simple statements. Especially in this particular passage

around and whisk back home, but all I can hear is my mother’s stern voice saying “You need to this, this opportunity will look amazing on your college application.” I wiped my sweating hands on my dark blue jeans and with all my pugnacity I walked through the scratching automatic doors. My

any friends, no matter how hard she tried. Compared to her sister, she was a disappointment. Her sister had straight A’s, played volleyball, ran track, was the homecoming queen and was also the most popular and the prettiest girl in school. On top of this, she had a major crush on the most popular boy in the school. She doesn’t even understand why she likes him, she just has for the last 5 years for some reason. I mean Kevin was a shallow and a horrible person. Yet, she liked him and the reason for

crackle to life. No one was around to hear it, with the exception of Dritte Zug. “Never forget, that the Ryanites imperialist dogs violated the non-aggression pact their Coalition signed with the Dweller peoples who chose to remain independent!” the voice of a male was shouted aloud from the loudspeaker as the members of Dritte Zug cautiously moved past it in a neat column. “As the scum of the Earth for having sent their armored troops and armies west to secure their imperialistic ambitions, they are

Sally has a cow, Sally's cow is called Silly. Silly is scrumptious. Sally knows this because she is a vampire. She drinks silly's blood every night. Sally loves Silly. One night Sally went to drink blood from Silly to get enough strength to go find the fantasy forest and stop the dark wolves from ending the world. Silly saw her and smashed her with her tail. Sally was astonished. How could Silly do this to her! So while Silly was in a deep sleep Sally crept up slowly, slowly, until she was in bite’s

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difficult problems is passive voice. Take these sentences as example : “ The rice is cook” and “ Cơm chín rồi”. We can see that these two sentences have the same meaning but one in passive form and the other in active form. Thus, It makes learners confused about using passive form properly when translating because sometimes an active sentence in Vietnamese can be a passive sentence in English. As a teacher-to-be of English, a Vietnamese learner, I want to do this paper to help English learner

to take her home, and told her to take the shortcut, ultimately leading to Eleanor’s death. When this happens, she loses friends and is afraid to make any, afraid she will lose them too. After losing Mitch, I also lost my Nana and Papa (grandmother and grandfather). My cousin, Dimity had bowel cancer and although she is alive and well now, it is still scary to think how close we were to losing her. This made me realize, unlike other people my age, how close death is in our everyday lives, and, unlike

This week’s reading focuses on one of my known weaknesses, writing. I am always trying to improve my style. I feel that two of the biggest problems I have are word use and my style and tone (Bovee & Thill, 2016). I use sites online to assist in pointing these out. I am slowly learning but I still have much more to understand. In our reading it says, “The right tone depends on the nature of your message and your relationship with the reader” (Bovee & Thill, 2016 p. 126). Our reading also gave us