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Athens Direct Democracy

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Research Question: How did Athens’ system of direct democracy contribute to the success of its military engagements during the 5th century?

Bibliography Tridimas, George. "A political economy perspective of direct democracy in ancient Athens." Constitutional Political Economy 22, no. 1 (March 2011): 58-82. Accessed April 9, 2017. http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.liberty.edu/10.1007/s10602-010-9093-5 Athens possessed a very complex system of government. Since it is still studied to this day there are quite a few factors worth researching. It developed democracy to a higher form and is highly revered for its ability to institute a system of direct democracy and allow its citizens to contribute to the negotiations in various institutions.
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The article again evaluates like the others Athens system of democracy and discusses how it compared to other polis city-states and how it benefited the forms of warfare it possessed as well as advanced these forms of warfare. It discusses Athens system of government and explains how other scholarly sources had not yet evaluated government influence on the success of the military. The government could overcome obstacles faced by other polis city-states and because of their organization they could accomplish more in many areas including the success of their military. They could construct a reliable government and the citizens could participate and have a say. Their democracy was also able to bring more wealth and fund the military and make it a more significant …show more content…

Editing the research question to include success of military engagements as well as a specific period appeared to be the right choice when reviewing research. The sources give an excellent perspective to Athens democracy and how it could benefit their society. It is important to have sources that support the topic sentence and can provide a somewhat thorough analysis of whatever points the writer is attempting to prove or illustrate.
Athens military revolution for the prior assignment was briefly covered in one source, the other sources provided excellent material but did not directly support the topic sentence. Through editing the research question and more thorough evaluation of the sources, the research better supports the newly edited research question. It is important to carefully read one’s research to avoid such a mistake and instead provide a concise topic that is adequately supported by the research

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