In class we have been studying poetry, and the two poems I have chosen to compare are “In a Brixtan Markit” and “Not My Business”.
“Not My Business” is about four people who are standing up for what they believe in and they are getting arrested by the government to stop them from speaking out. In the last verse the man who is trying not to get involved because he doesn’t want to get punished but when they come after him his attitude changes. Niya Osundare who is a Nigerian poet of whom uses his poetry to speak out against the cruel dictatorship that ruled his country.
“In A Brixtan Markit” is about a man who walked into a market and a police officer takes his bag and in the end the office beats up the man. “In A Brixtan Markit” was
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The five verses are in an irregular pattern. Verse one and four are three lines long, whereas verses two three and five lines long. I think it is structured like this because if you look back at your poem you would see that the verses that are three lines long are about how he feels also what he believes, but the verses that are five lines long they are about what is actually happening.
In the first poem “Not My Business” the atmosphere is aggressive and seems sad. The aggressiveness is created by the way he says they treated the people e.g. “beat him soft like clay, and stuffed him down the belly of a waiting jeep”. Also “booted the whole house awake and dragged Danali out”. It`s sad because the one person doesn’t seem to care. As long as he doesn’t get involved and he doesn’t get affect him then he doesn’t care. Also when they say “then off to a lengthy absence” even though this line is vague as it is not very clear, it suggest that he may not be coming back and it makes you wonder whether he is still alive. When reading the poem the poet wants us to feel sorry for the people involved. Also he wants us to feel sad because they are being treated unfairly. You know they are being treated unfairly because they are not really doing anything wrong, but they are being treated as if they were mass murders. It shows it’s unfair by the way they are being treated. Like the way they are being beaten up e.g. “beat him soft like clay, and stuffed him down the belly of a waiting
There is no verse in the poem, but there is a rhythm that emerges when read aloud. The author uses a negative, positive pattern throughout the majority of the poem, which, accentuates the differences between her positive feeling about the memory, vs. the white author’s perception of the memory.
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The song is forty-four lines in all with a consistent line length, where it's not too long or too short. The poem uses free form allowing the freedom to say what was needed. It allowed him
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With a few exceptions, the poem primarily follows the form of accentual-syllabic verse. The majority of lines are composed of three syllables, most often two unstressed and one stressed. Using a combination of structural technique and descriptive language, Williams emphasizes the action of visual perception.
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What were they like and Not My Business are both poems that convey their message through their language and various techniques. In ‘What were they like’ the poet describes a questioner asking traditional impressions of Vietnahm to an expert who answers them. The poet suggests that the war destroys happiness. However in ‘Not my Busisness’, the poet describes two neighbours discussing bad things that are going on in their neighbourhood. The poet does this to suggest that if we don’t take action to prevent bad things happening to others, eventually it will come back to us.
only three short stanzas. By keeping it short he also allows the reader to interpret the poem
Along with the irregularities in meter, neither poem has a regular line length or rhyming pattern. Dickinson’s poem contains alternating tetrameters and trimeters, with the exception of the first line, which contains 7 syllables. The poem contains some irregular rhyme; ‘heard’ in line 5 rhymes with ‘bird’ in line 7, and ‘Sea’ in line 10 rhymes with ‘Me’ in line 12. Whitman’s poem contains even more irregular line lengths. The first 4 lines of each stanza vary from 12 to 15 syllables, but the last 4 lines of each stanza vary from 5 to 8 syllables. Unlike in Dickinson’s poem, the rhyming scheme carries throughout the whole poem, although the AABBCDED rhyme pattern contains a few cases of near rhyme.