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Executing David Clayton Hill: You Wouldn’t Do a Dog This Way by Elizabeth Weill-Greenberg

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Elizabeth Weill- Greenberg in the essay, “Executing David Clayton Hill: You Wouldn’t Do a Dog This Way” published on March 16, 2004 in counterpunch.org argues that the Lethal injection is an inhumane way to die. Greenberg supports her arguments by explaining that people can feel everything while they are dying, because the injection just paralyzed your body. The author’s purpose is to persuade the reader to write the governor and ask for a stay in execution of David Clayton in order to stop this inhumane lethal injection. Greenberg audience is South Caroline, and she writes in an informative tone. The essay is composed in Fifteen Paragraphs organized in four sections. In Section one, paragraph one and two explain the basic information of …show more content…

They state that most of the people who are being executed have a fifty percent they were still conscious thought the execution. Judge halts executions in New Jersey. The court is trying to make this execution reasonable because some of the states just executed without a really good reason. Also, the court ordered that the New Jersey Department of Corrections should investigate more about these criminals, to execute them. The evidence used is good overall, but it is somehow confusing. In Section Four, paragraphs twelve to fifteen, the author concludes that has our time had changed; some of our technology also changes; now we can say that the lethal injection is better than see you in an electric chair. Also, at the bottom of the essay, the author writes a little biography about her, like to proof all this information. This section somehow is persuading the reader to write the governor Sanford and ask for an atay of execution. Even though this section has a lot of persuading, the author should put more effort to really persuade people to do what she wants us to do. To conclude, I really like this essay, the topic is very interesting because not everybody knows this information. However is for 2004. It has really good evidence, but I think it needs more of persuading. Also, I think this essay is not well organized. I think that it needs more personal

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