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My Essay: My Story Of My Writing

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I am Marissa Gubacz and feel that I am a very strong writer. When I was in elementary school I use to write books for fun all the time. Obviously, these stories were not well written, but I just enjoyed the feeling of creating my own fairy tale and story. My first graded story I wrote was in sixth grade about Christmas. I enjoyed this project because I got to write a story and draw pictures. Although writing was extremely entertaining to me, once I got into ninth grade and had to take the class World Literature, or English 9, my feelings toward writing started to decline because we had to start writing long essays. In this class we had to write three essays. The first essay I wrote was about the Odyssey. This essay was a struggle for me to write because I had to learn a new essay writing …show more content…

My topic I wrote about was the top ten Olympic gymnasts. In this essay we were required to follow the Jane Schaffer technique. At first, I assumed writing this essay was not going to be a problem because I have already done so many Jane Schaffer essays, yet I still struggled on writing it. Vocabulary and sentence variety were things that I frequently had trouble with. In addition, nearly all my sentences in this essay were repetitive. However, I did make an abundance of improvements while writing this essay, such as using more transitional words and having excellent sentence structure. In addition, I also created a nice attention grabber introduction paragraph. This essay I wrote says a lot about my progressions as a writer. For example, I have never earned an A on essay in the past, however on this essay I did receive an A. Additionally, I know that I have mastered using transitional words and writing a marvelous attention grabber introduction paragraph. However, I still do have trouble writing essays because I struggle with sentence variety and I do not use that much

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