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My Reflection Of Writing In High School

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In high school, I would always get the highest score in my class when we would write essays. Naturally, I adopted a sense of confidence where I would not spend a lot of time writing and still expect a good grade. However, in the first paper I wrote in COLWRIT R1A, I followed my same routine effortlessly dedicate about one hour to write the essay. When the grade came back for this assignment, I was given my first B in a long time. Bewildered, I made a bunch of excuses in an attempt to justify this B, and claimed that it was because “Berkeley has higher standards than my high school, but I am still a great writer. I will just start dedicating more time to writing my essays.” However, as the semester continued, it seemed as if I could not get an A on any of my papers that I had submitted even though I worked on it for a long time. After a deep reflection, I realized that I have been missing more as a writer than I had thought. There was so much more that I can improve when writing my essays. For example, this semester I learned that my thesis has to be narrow, that it is acceptable to deviate from the five paragraph structure, and to use questions as a tool to help me develop an interesting thesis.
To begin with, my thesis statement would be very broad when I would write essays in high school. Throughout my body paragraphs, I would write down the first idea that popped up into my head. Therefore, I would often get lost in my own thoughts and I would have multiple topics compressed into one paragraph. However, this class showed me how important and helpful a specific and narrow thesis is because it will help me organize my thoughts and write an interesting paper. For example, in my essay “Truth of Bipolar Disorder”, I specifically wrote in my thesis that I wanted to talk about the syntax, diction, and irony that Sascha DuBrul used in his article “The Bipolar World”. Since my thesis was specific and narrow, it also functioned as a guide that I can use to organize my thoughts in a way where each piece of evidence would be in its own designated paragraph. A clear thesis prevented me from losing track of what I wanted to talk about because each thought was already laid out in my thesis statement.
Secondly, I learned

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