In high school, I would always get the highest score in my class when we would write essays. Naturally, I adopted a sense of confidence where I would not spend a lot of time writing and still expect a good grade. However, in the first paper I wrote in COLWRIT R1A, I followed my same routine effortlessly dedicate about one hour to write the essay. When the grade came back for this assignment, I was given my first B in a long time. Bewildered, I made a bunch of excuses in an attempt to justify this B, and claimed that it was because “Berkeley has higher standards than my high school, but I am still a great writer. I will just start dedicating more time to writing my essays.” However, as the semester continued, it seemed as if I could not get an A on any of my papers that I had submitted even though I worked on it for a long time. After a deep reflection, I realized that I have been missing more as a writer than I had thought. There was so much more that I can improve when writing my essays. For example, this semester I learned that my thesis has to be narrow, that it is acceptable to deviate from the five paragraph structure, and to use questions as a tool to help me develop an interesting thesis.
To begin with, my thesis statement would be very broad when I would write essays in high school. Throughout my body paragraphs, I would write down the first idea that popped up into my head. Therefore, I would often get lost in my own thoughts and I would have multiple topics compressed into one paragraph. However, this class showed me how important and helpful a specific and narrow thesis is because it will help me organize my thoughts and write an interesting paper. For example, in my essay “Truth of Bipolar Disorder”, I specifically wrote in my thesis that I wanted to talk about the syntax, diction, and irony that Sascha DuBrul used in his article “The Bipolar World”. Since my thesis was specific and narrow, it also functioned as a guide that I can use to organize my thoughts in a way where each piece of evidence would be in its own designated paragraph. A clear thesis prevented me from losing track of what I wanted to talk about because each thought was already laid out in my thesis statement.
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Writing in high school was difficult for me in that I had all gifted/ AP teachers expecting an “extra mile” style of writing that I did not completely grasp. While my writing consisted of strong ideas, they were not thoroughly explained, leaving them under developed and mildly incomprehensible. I am a fast paced thinker with new ideas constantly popping into my head; consequently, elaborating on ideas is a challenge because I often forget that although I am aware of how I have drawn a conclusion, the reader is not.
In, high school my teachers assign me with different kinds of reading and writing. The types reading that i remember is the Killing Mocking Bird and The Adventure of Odysseus in freshman year of highschool. I didn't like the two book that much. Next the types of writing i recall writing is an observation poem in my english writing class i had to observe an thing and write at least five line poems using the four key items(see, hear, feel, and think). I had to write a lot summaries on articles and writing prompts in four years in secondary school. Also, i did a reflection essay where i had created an claim, counterclaim, evidence, rebuttal, TAG (title, Author, and Genre) of information and quote of one of the scenes in the story of Shakespeare Hamlet before i start my reflection writing.
Think about your experiences of writing at college. Which types of assignments have you found helpful in strengthening your writing skills? Where do you want to improve your writing? What’s the most useful advice you’re received that’s helped you improve your writing. Be as specific as possible.
Upper school English teacher Ms. L.C. says her favorite smell is that of a melting popsicle in the summer. “I love the sweet fructose of the popsicle juice,” said L.C. “Especially the way it combines with the smell of the wooden stick.”
When I sit back and I reflect on all the papers I have wrote, one stands out most to me. During my senior year of high school, we had to write an 8 paged defense on something we strongly believed in. In this rhetorical analysis, I will be analyzing my senior defense topic, outline, rough draft, revising process and final draft verse the papers that I am writing now. Before I dive into comparing the ways I did my papers then and now, I want to share some background information with you about myself, and how my writing process evolved as my identity evolved.
The majority of them were in my English classes and a few essays for other classes, which takes only a few days to compose. I mainly took standard English classes and one honors throughout high school. The grades I've received from my writings and also for the class are mainly B's and a few A's, nevertheless, I would like to receive an A in this class. At this point, you might be frowning and begin to question my previous statement. How could someone who only worked hard enough just to receive a B's will receive an A in this class? I am also not a very experienced writer as I've established earlier. I also fully understand that this course will be more challenging than any of my previous English classes, hence I am having an anxiety attack while writing this essay, nevertheless I truly want to become a better writer. A good writing skill is one of the keys to become successful. You will be required to be able to intellectually express yourself to
There is nothing like waking up to a blow job to get the day going. I opened my eyes to find Megan's blond head slowly up and down on me as the necklace lifter and fell on my leg while it dangled from my neck.
Over the course of this class I have changed as a writer. My writing has improved, yet their are some similarities between the writing. The writer I was before and after this class is different and the changes should be announced. Now when I write I know how to use transition, not just any basic transition but actually be able to flow from one point to another with quality grammar. A second thing I do as a writer now is knowing how to use MLA 8 formating. The first essay I turned in was extremely wrong on formatting and makes me cringe just looking at it. My citations were all APA formatting and in the header of the essay I put my name, date, teacher, and class. This is completely wrong and am surprised I even got a grade as high as I did. Another thing from looking at my first essay is that I could not write with the proper form. My whole last paragraph of my exemplification essay was useless because it did not have an examples. The writer I am now is more politically correct and can write when in a mode without going out of it.
Professor Van Es always stated, “A thesis statement is the most important part of an essay”. Before this class I wouldn’t have even found myself using them! Now when I go to write an essay or a paper that is the first thing that I do before jumping into the assignment. A thesis really does tie your whole essay together and can base how your paper is going to go by measuring the strength of your thesis statement. If you have a weak thesis you will have a week paper. Also, having a god thesis that you can look back and rely on at the beginning of
My writing skills which I have worked on over the few months I have been in English 102 have changed quite a bit in my opinion. There are many things which I have improved upon that were amongst my weaker writing skills when the year began. On the opposite side of that point, there are also many things which I still need to improve upon if I want to truly elevate my writing to a level that I will be confident in. Finally, I have gained new skills outside of writing from this class, particularly the activities which we did in class at various points throughout the year. These things all cumulate together to give me an appreciation of English courses which I did not previously have.
Anna dropped on the hard wood floor, her bed sheets following her. Suddenly, the softballs on the shelf came tumbling down. Her face turned red hot as she gave a cursory glance at Matt.
Over the course of this past semester, my ability to write has improved tremendously. Prior to undertaking this course, my expertise in writing was not as fine-tuned as it should have been. I had never previously been enrolled in a class specifically tailored to writing-- which was quite clear. Upon reading my past works, it becomes apparent that my writing style consisted of fluff, small words, and inconsistently structured sentences. These problems have, for the most part, been remedied with the coursework I have tackled in College Writing. Rather than long, drawn out papers that take an eternity to reach the primary point, my recent work is much nicer in terms of composition and grammar. I credit these improvements to the three primary
It was 1996. We were seniors in high school, we lived in a lifeless suburb of Sacramento, and we were always bored. There were three of us then, Jack, Dan, and myself, John. We were an unremarkable group, and though none of us would have dared to admitted it, we were decidedly unpopular. Not so much in the sense that we were ever targets of significant harassment. We had never been shoved into lockers, received undue beatdowns, or been subject to the disdain of the student body, because all of those require a degree of visibility, which we simply did not posses. Our lives that year were predominantly occupied with selling tickets and overpriced popcorn from the dingy window of the drive in movie theater we worked in and finding time to
When I entered more regular classes in my junior year of high school, particularly my expository writing class, I did not do well. I was accustomed to doing the bare minimum, putting very little effort in, as that was what was required to pass my special education classes. However, it soon became clear that my expository class would be challenging because my teacher expected great things from her students. Once I realized this, I threw myself into the work. I would go to class after school to ask questions about the content that was covered, as well as ask my parents for feedback on my papers. I passed the class with a C, rather than my usual A, but my writing skills increased exponentially. The C grade was obviously not what I had hoped for, but it meant more to me than my A’s. There were many times that I struggled with self-doubt, wondering if I had made a mistake in my request to
When I started my first week of Composition 1, I thought I would have a difficult time writing papers and getting good grades. I didn’t believe in myself because when I would write a paper for a class, I would get a high B at best, and those teachers weren’t grading all that hard, but now I was in a class that graded hard and had most of my grade based off of the papers I wrote. However, I still took this class because I wanted to get better at writing. Even though I didn’t believe in myself and my ability to write papers, I