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The time i was hit by a car!! Throughout life you should always be more cautious when going places without adults. If you are to do this make sure you are ready, safe, and also suited with safety procedures equipment or someone with you to help . You should be ready for the unexpected and unknown. Try to be safe as possible at all times, one way you could ensure this is by being cautious. When traveling or going places alone without adults. When traveling or hanging with friends you should never be a follower. This could result could have a very critical effect September 5 2014 was a normal day for 12 year old Curion Anderson. This day was also planned to be extremely fun and exciting, due to the fact that it was the day before …show more content…

They where so excited and impacient for the time to come they stayed outside late talking about there plans and fun. They had reached a point of determination of that they would go see central play, for a early celebration. Life took a different route little did they known just by going to the store. On this slight change of pplans everything change, it change in ways of now inside of meeting at my house they would now met at the store instead. Even with this change of plans it didnt route as planned, there friends didnt met them, and also they stayed longer than they intended to. During there trip from the store Curion suggested they did not go down “Dead Man’s Hill”. Alex disagreed and pesauaded him to follow one becuase the candy man lived at the top of “Dead Man’s Hill” and two because it was …show more content…

As in much of a rush as Curion and Alex are he is also darting towards us, while in the motion to meet one another they scream loudly shouting each others name. Curion screaming Ray Ray, Alex also is screaming Ray Ray’s name in joy. It seem like forever for Curion and Alex to reach the interception point of the roads they were tensed with happiness and joy to finally be on there way home. As they are entering the interception Curion and Alex slows down by using there feet because their bikes have no brakes, they reach a point of speed slow enough to see around the corner of both right and left of the interception for cars. They continue on their journey back to the previous speed on their bikes. Then boom alex drops his iteams behind and stops to pick them up while Curion is still heading down ther hill. Curion till this day wish he wouldve just stopped out of the blue before offically crossing the interceptions of the roads……..BOOOOOOOMMMMM CRASSSSHHHHH EEERRRRRKKKK SKRRRTTTTT SKRRRRTTTT was the noise made of the very loud acciendent or seem to be a acciendent said by the driver…..Tilll this day Curion says he remebers the voices of his friend Alex and Ray Ray screaming to others the three friends knew down the street. Saying, panicing, confused, and suddenly shocked of what just happen right before a glimps of there eyes,

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