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Personal Narrative Essay: Lily At The Beach

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There was a girl named Lily , she is took a year in medical school, she is a surfer ,she has a little sister named Diana , and she has a father . The mother passed away when she a little girl and she misses her so much . She wanted to get that thing off of her mind ,so she went to the beach to remind her of her mother . She went in a car with this guy ,but he knew how to speak Spanish and a little bit of English . Well so does she ,but only a little bit . Charlie said , “ Call me if you have trouble .” Lily says “ Don't worry I will.” So Charlie dropped Lily and finally arrived at the beach . It was mid day she would look at the beach and look at the pictures on her phone of her mother on this beach and she says, “Yes this is the one.”

The beach was a very tropical the water was very clear and light blue . The sand smooth ,comfortable,and soft . The mountains were beautiful and big .It also had so many tall trees . Lily starts running to the spot where she wants her things and she starts getting ready to surf . As she puts her swimsuit on she sees these 2 boys surfing out at the distance . She is really excited to swim so she swimming …show more content…

All you see left of him is his helmet. All her head goes to is the helmet because it has a camera . She was looking at the shark based what angle it was at ,so she can quickly swim to the helmet and get the camera on it . Lily tried to swim towards it all you is the a fin coming after and then she was trying go back to the rock then the it was so close to bite Lily’s hand . When she gets the camera she records herself telling the camera that she is not going to miss her life and showing where she's at and what is coming after to get her she is also showing how damaged she is . When she finished recording herself she started crying

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