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Rome as we know it was not built in a day. It took years for the vastest empire of its time to become what we know it as today. Rome was an impressive military power and was organized in how they handled their affairs. The success of Rome comes down to a few major factors, such as, the strong leadership of Rome, the way they handled conquered lands as well as technological advancement. These factors can be seen as the foundation of the successes of the Roman Empire and were later taken on by successive empires and countries later on. However, out of all of these factors, one of them played a more crucial role in the success of the Roman Empire. The strong leadership of Rome can be said to be the most influential cause of the achievements of …show more content…

Plebeians were able to become members of the Senate after the Conflict of Orders. The first plebeians to be elected to office were called novus homos, as they were the first of their family to serve in the senate. This term means new man. This is important because now Roman leadership could be drawn from both classes and not just patricians. For Rome to be successful, it needed the advice of all of its citizens, no matter what class they came from. Many influential Romans were novus homos. One example of an influential novus homo is Cicero. In his first speech to the Senate as consul, Cicero makes a point to announce that he is a novus homo. Cicero goes on about how proud he is of the fact that he has no consular lineage. He thinks of his consulship as a huge honor. Cicero then became an influential member of the Senate. He was known for being an excellent orator and for giving very powerful speeches. Another example of an influential novus homo was Gaius Marius. Gaius Marius was a successful Roman general and consul. The importance of Gaius Marius will be discussed later. Romans were typically set in their ways. It was already difficult to become consul for consular families and it was even more difficult for novus homos. However, political power could not remain in the hands of the wealthy for long. For the empire to succeeded they needed new leadership and new ideas. The introduction of the novus …show more content…

My partner mentioned that I could beef up my introduction and conclusion. This was something that I noticed as well. I have a hard time writing introductions and conclusions. I added more background information to the introduction and tried to end my paper in a better way. My partner also made note that my paper did not flow very well. She mentioned that I should link my paragraphs. I did notice this in my writing and made a point to go back and fix this in my paper. I wanted to link my topics so they did not just stand alone and they could be connected to each other. Before my paragraphs were stand alone paragraphs and went back and linked them together in a way that makes sense. My partner also made note that I needed to correct my first footnote. I went back and corrected my footnote and fix my bibliography as well. I tried to make my ideas flow in a way that also made sense. My partner pointed out that parts of the paper just jumped from one idea to the next. I went back to make the ideas flow more continuously. I appreciate that my partner said I did an excellent job of cutting to the chase and saying my arguments in a direct manner. I would like to think that I took the criticism of paper seriously and went back into my paper and made the appropriate

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