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Whitney White: A Fictional Narrative

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Whitney White was a beautiful woman, only 30 years old, but she had received something she didn’t expect, a daughter. She now had to take care of the child all on her own, since the father had left her, but on July 6th, in the year of 1962, she decided all of that was going to change.

She strutted along the Broadwalk, as her charming hazel, hair glistened in the cool wind. She was putting her sunglasses over her chocolate brown eyes when she spotted Chris Mustard, her jerk husband, out of the corner of her eye. A feeling of fury bolted through her. This was the wicked man that left her in debt. This was the wicked man that left her to take care of their child on her own. Then, she saw something she wasn’t expecting, another woman. That …show more content…

Mr. Evans sent me here to check out the candlestick. He knows me so well. I love antique things," she replied with a forced smile.

"Oh...Um... It's over there," Isaac hesitantly pointed to the candlestick.

Whitney nodded and picked it up. She studied it for a moment and peeked at her dress. Still white. She still had her innocence.

"Are you thinking of putting that out in your house? Lauren might break it," Rachel inquired, noticing Whitney's suspicious behavior.

"I don’t think you should ask questions, young lady," she snapped back harshly, then chuckled to play it off like she was joking.

The two of them giggled uncertainly. Whitney stared down at her heels as they clicked their way to the counter. She grinned at the children as she handed Isaac her money.

"Well, uh, have a nice day, Ms. White," Isaac stuttered.

"Oh, I will. I'll tell Lauren you said hi! Goodbye Isaac!" Whitney called out. She felt sorry for the two unaware teens. They had no idea that when the clock strikes midnight, Chris would drop dead.

When the sun started to go down, Whitney started to strut along the Broadwalk. She saw Chris with his girlfriend walking toward the Ferris wheel. She knew that the carnival would start closing at midnight, so then there would be less people to witness …show more content…

"What are you doing?"

She rushed toward him an held up the candlestick.

"Whitney? Please! What are you doing? Whitney! Whitn-"

She violently smashed his head in with the bronze candlestick. She did it constantly. She didn’t slow down until she was certain he was dead, but even then she still didn’t stop.

"That was for being such a great father," she snapped at his corpse after she stopped. She looked down at her dress. Red. Her dress was a bright, bloody red. All of her innocence was gone. She dragged his muscular body behind the Ferris wheel.

Suddenly, a scream louder than a dog barking for food could be heard. She turned around and there she was. Her daughter.

"Mommy! I came down here because you were gone for a bit and-" she sniffed.

"Lauren," Whitney was in disbelief while her daughter just broke down. She couldn’t take it. She broke out into a sprint and she escaped. She escaped from her daughter. She escaped from the murder. She was away from everything. Nothing could stop her now. Not her daughter, the police, her husband's girlfriend, or anybody else. All of her innocence was gone, she truly was on her own, and she was heading who knows

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