preview

Essay on A Remarkable Man, My Idol, My Grandfather

Decent Essays

A Remarkable Man, My Idol, My Grandfather

Dr. Benre’s comments: Marty paints a telling portrait of her step-grandfather, but never relies merely on telling the reader. Small anecdotes about her grandfather, as well as some of his habits, gave Marty’s story a much more powerful presentation that it would have if she had simply told the readers that he was neat and kind. More importantly, she maintains a significance to her story which travels from beginning to end. She uses her story to play on emotions without crossing the line into melodrama and makes a telling point in her conclusion. Marty has written an excellent story, not just an essay about someone she remembers.

Though he was an overwhelming three hundred pounds, …show more content…

He found great joy in traveling to different places, but he was also just as happy to stay at home for a vigorous game of Rook. As long as he thought we were having fun, he was happy. I remember his saying, "Okay, all those who love me must give me a hug." He was gentle and kind, but most people could only see his tremendous size.

He was not the type of man to defend himself when others ridiculed him simply because he knew he was overweight and "looked different." As people strolled by and invariably commented on his size, he simply whispered. That man is just not happy with himself. That's why he teasing me," or jokingly say "She just doesn't know good-looking when she sees it." All of this was his way of dealing with the blind ignorance of others, reaffirming his positive self-image, and loving the life his God given him. Despite the way he acted on the outside, however, we knew he secretly wished he could change his physical appearance, After years of being laughed and pointed at, he finally decided to so something about his size. After much agonizing and numerous professional opinions, he decided to have a corrective surgery. Soon after his research on possible surgical methods ended, he went into the hospital. Our entire family was there to support his decision and to cheer him on, pushing to the backs of our

Get Access