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A Unique Point Of View

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A Unique Point of View Unique point of view strongly influences Scott F. Fitzgerald’s “Bernice Bobs Her Hair” and Sandra Cisneros’ short story “Eleven.” “Bernice Bobs Her Hair” portrays a girl willing to give up her unique character to form a new and attractive personality from the help from those around her which she hopes will make her more mentally attractive. Furthermore, Sandra Cisneros’ “Eleven” captures a girl emotionally unsettled who observes in herself that while she turns eleven, she also portrays emotions from her past ages of ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one through a dilemma caused by her misunderstanding teacher. Both authors incorporate comparable and contrasting point of view styles …show more content…

Comparably, in “Bernice Bobs Her Hair” this problem also lies great since the entirety of its story Fitzgerald writes in third person. Third person provides an impeccable description of every situation, however, without shifting to any other point of view, Fitzgerald disadvantages the reader in obtaining a more personal view of one of the main characters. For example, at the time where Bernice is about to cut off her cousin Marjorie’s hair it states, “She was by the bedside now, very deliberate and calm. She acted swiftly. Bending over she found one of the braids of Marjorie 's hair, followed it up with her hand to the point nearest the head, and then holding it a little slack so that the sleeper would feel no pull, she reached down with the shears and severed it.” Without the use of first or second person, the reader lacks in attaining Bernice’s thoughts leading up to her drastic action and cutting off Marjorie’s hair. Overall, through both stories use of one main point of view, reader’s lack attaining a different perspective of Fitzgerald’s “Bernice Bobs Her Hair” and Cisneros’ “Eleven.”
Second, “Bernice Bobs Her Hair” more effectively uses narration in its story since Fitzgerald uses an omniscient narrative presence so that the reader can get a glimpse of all the characters thoughts and feelings. This overall better use of narration reoccurs throughout the book such as at the time that Rachel asks Charley’s opinion whether or not she should bob her hair by

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