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Benjamin Banneker High Level Diction

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Throughout the entire history of the United States, there has never been a more controversial subject than that of slavery. The ways we’ve mishandled fellow Americans and treated them as inferior beings cannot be forgotten. Benjamin Banneker was a child of some of these slaves. In his letter to the president at the time, Thomas Jefferson, Banneker uses rhetorical strategies - high-level diction, repetition, and syntax - to argue against slavery and hopefully change Jefferson's view on the unforgettable subject. Banneker’s use of high-level diction primarily establishes his ethos. In the 3rd paragraph, lines 11-13, Banneker writes, “...detaining by fraud and violence so numerous a part of my brethren under groaning captivity and cruel oppression…” Banneker’s consistent use …show more content…

His entire letter is actually just five sentences. However, his use of long and periodic sentences makes a large impact. Banneker’s letter was definitely not the first letter sent to Jefferson regarding the issue of slavery, but it was probably the first one that forced him to keep reading. Any letter could have been made up of 20 different short sentences, but each of those sentences could’ve been a stopping point for Jefferson. If Jefferson’s eyes glazed over a sentence that was displeasing, he could’ve easily set it down and never pick it up again. There was never any incentive for Jefferson to keep reading sentence after sentence after sentence. Banneker’s use of long sentences, and a severe lack of periods forces Jefferson to keep reading. The letter doesn’t give Jefferson any room to put it down. Jefferson is forced to regard all of Banneker’s ideas because he has no stopping point (other than the end of the letter). Banneker also chooses to delay his main point, until the very end of the letter. By doing this, Jefferson has to read through the entirety of the letter in order to understand the main argument that Banneker is attempting to

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