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Eleven By Sandra Cisneros Essay

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Sandra Cisneros’ use of literary elements, such as tone, repetition, and figurative language, causes the reader to that it takes a long time to grow up. Cisneros benefits from her usage of tone to show how Rachel, the main character, struggles with growing up and to help readers relate to her. Rachel describes that “when you wake up you expect to feel eleven, but you don’t” (Cisneros 1). Explaining how she doesn’t feel a year older on her birthday, she says that she expects to get the sensation of being eleven. This shows how eager she is to grow up, but she’s impatient at the thought of it. However, although she wishes to be older, growing up doesn’t happen all at once. Rachel also illustrates how she’s eleven, but she says “I wish I was one hundred and two” (Cisneros 2). In this part of the story, she is struggling with dealing with an ugly red sweater. She thinks that if she were older, these problems wouldn’t be in her life, as shown when she wishes to be one hundred …show more content…

Throughout the text, Rachel frequently repeats “not mine, not mine, not mine” (Cisneros 1). Reiteration makes the fact that the sweater isn’t hers stronger and clearer. She isn’t bold enough yet to be upfront and say the sweater isn’t hers, which is a reason she could want to be older. Finding she wants to be stronger also shows the need to be older, as many people gain confidence with age. Lines similar to “when you’re eleven, you’re also ten, and nine, and eight, and seven, and six, and five, and four, and three, and two, and one” (Cisneros 1), visits constantly. Counting down the years explains how Rachel feels about aging. She goes back to saying how “you feel like you’re still ten. And you are – underneath the year that makes you eleven” (Cisneros 1). When she counts down, she proves a point about how no one feels their current age until they’re almost another

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