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Examples Of Sexism In Ex Machina

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Congrats on completing your D2! I enjoyed reading your essay. I believe the question/puzzle your essay is trying to answer is how to fix the gender depiction in Ex Machina. The existing conversation among scholars is that the movie is sexist and portrays women in a negative light. I think this is an interesting question to ask. Your essay has a clear “they say—I ask” thought movie. I was able to see that the scholars see an issue with gender in the movie, and then you ask what can be done to fix it. The paper will provide us ways to solve the sexism in the film.

This paper will offer ways to solve the sexism in Ex Machina. I think this is an interesting question because it is important to figure out ways to solve a problem. By fixing this problem, society can figure out how to deal with gender in AI, which I think is very important. …show more content…

Your motive is that scholars do not provide ways to fix the problem. Then your thesis is that Garland has a responsibility to “deliver his message more clearly by proposing a better representation.” I found this to be very vague. You are just stating that Garland should have presented it better, but it does not answer the motive’s question. Also, I sometimes had trouble following some of your evidence. You state that “his robots closely resembles prostitution” (2), but I am not clear how you draw this conclusion. Maybe mention what makes them look like prostitutes. Furthermore, I think on page 3 you should elaborate more on the femme fatale because a common reader might not know what that is. Furthermore, I think your sources can engage more with each other. Right now, the sources seem to be separated into

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