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How To Write A Short Story: What's Up, Gilroy?

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As they tread along, Luke noticed a strange, strange occurrence: while he was looking down at the ground, he saw an ankle-high wind stroke all about the surface of the ground. Out of the tree line on his right, birds, birds of all kinds, and thousands of them, flew out and darted up into the sky. It was a frenzied exodus. No one said a word–just looked as they remained froze there. Luke's ears popped, but he felt the pressure in them begin to build once again. He heard what sounded like the pulsating sound of current dancing about the air around him. Then came an earsplitting sound from the forest. Like the sound of a volcano erupting. The shock wave leaned the trees over like they were rubber sticks. The sound of the blowing leaves was a tempestuous one. The wind force knocked them all to ground like they were a sand bag. That fast there was peace. When Luke looked up into the sky he called out, “Eugene!” …show more content…

Not knowing what just happened. Heads poked in all directions.

Eugene looked to the back of the line, and carefully looked all around before asking, “What's up, Gilroy?”

“Look up at the sky. Tell me you guys didn't notice the difference!” he fretted.

Page became more alarmed. “Look at the clouds. Where the hell did they come from? A minute ago it was sunny when the birds flew out of there. Not a cloud in the sky anywhere.”

“Don't any of you hear that buzzing?”

“What kind of buzzing, son?”

“Electric

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