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I Just Black Monologue

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It was a warm summer night after a great night at my church youth group. The cool breeze of the car air conditioning wiggled through my hair (personification) sending a small shiver down my spine. The car radio blasting as my friends and I were jamming out to our favorite music, and the sound of laughter as we all laughed about how crazy we were. We were louder than a train. (hyperbole) That night we all had decided to go to Perkins after youth group so my friends and I were sitting in our car waiting for everyone else to get there. (participial phrase) Since we were early, we waited there for a while as more and more of the group started to arrive. My best friend told me she needed to talk to me about something so we stayed in the car for …show more content…

(participial phrase) What was she going to say? Did I do something wrong? Then she broke the news to me, she said she thought I was flirting with every guy I talked to and that I needed to hang out with my girl friends more. It took a few moments to process what she had just told me and I was left speechless and didn’t know what to say, I was as quite as the night. (simile) It was crazy how something so simple could make me feel so small. My heart was pounding like a drum (simile) and my eyes were pooling with water as I tried to hold back my tears, but I just couldn’t as the tears came streaming down my face like a river. (simile) I didn’t know why my best friend would say something like that about me or think that about me, and so I was pretty shocked. Do other people think this about me too? It made me really sad and I didn’t know what to do. That’s when I tried explaining to her that I was just a really friendly and talkative person and that I have many guy friends, but at the time she didn’t understand. I didn’t know what else to do because she didn’t believe me. It was hard for me to know that was what she thought of me when I knew it wasn’t

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