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Essay on Layered - Writing Reflection

Decent Essays

Writing a decent essay is as tedious, as nerve-racking, and as strenuous as constructing a layer cake from scratch. First you have to decide that you are going to tackle this feat, and that can be your biggest challenge, motivation. Then you must figure out what kind of cake batter you want to use. Collect all the ingredients to mesh together well, making one layer at a time. You throw all the layers together hoping that somehow they will come together to form a nifty design, but they don’t immediately. For now it is just a leaning tower of cake parts. So you start revising and modifying, adding toothpicks, trying to rectify the lean of the cake on one side. You coat the whole damn thing in icing, attempting to make it look better, but the …show more content…

There was sturdy evidence on the type of man that Satan portrayed. He was a very ‘cunning’ and ‘charming’ man. Not only did Brennan blatantly state that he was charming, but his actions in the woman’s home were very smart and deliberate. This made my discourse about his swagger powerful and more concise. Paying more attention to detail in Brennan’s piece, I was able to pencil in another claim based on the color green. Unfortunately, the paragraph was not directly supportive of my thesis. The outburst of the paragraph seemed to throw the entire flow of the paper off balance; therefore it was immediately excised.
The first layer of icing on my paper was intense; removing words, adding words, redefining sentence structures, and removing my trademark, awkward phrasing. The first to get revamped was the thesis. The original thesis led to questions and issues based on the word ‘hope’, that I did not address in the length of my paper. In order to remedy the situation, a minor phrase was cut and replaced with the actual supporting data. Next in my local revisions, were the long drawn out thoughts that needed to be simplified and broken down into different sentences. This occurred in almost every paragraph and wasted most of my time and exhausted much of my energy. For example, take the original sentence, “The woman from the article seems to learn from her chat with Satan that she is stronger than she gives herself credit for, that she can survive with herself and the

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