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Malala Yousafzai Thesis

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Thesis statement (Claim): Malala is a hero that stood up for what she believed that all women should have equal education. She sacrificed her life when she was shot in the head by a Taliban just to get her point across.

Hook: Malala Yousafzai, a women's right activist and one of the bravest woman in the world.

Evidence (direct quote):“I am only talking about education, women's rights and peace. I want poverty to end in tomorrow's Pakistan. I want every girl in Pakistan to go to school”, said Malala Yousafzai.

Reasoning (connecting E to C): Even though she knows the Taliban are after her, she's still speaking up against it even if it's worth dying for.

Evidence (paraphrase): On October 9th 2012, Malala was shot in the school bus for speaking …show more content…

Evidence (direct quote): “I want people to remember that Pakistan is my country. Even if its people hate me, I will still love it,” said Malala Yousafzai.

Reasoning (connecting E to C): Malala Yousafzai's early life was a hard time. She had to deal with the Taliban that took over her city. Later, she spoke up to the Taliban and made a move.

Evidence (paraphrase): Malala was born in July 12, 1992, Mingora, Swat Valley, Pakistan. She was a great student in her classes and outspoken. Suddenly,the area began to change as the Taliban tried to take control. On September 1, 2008, when Malala was 11 years old, her father took her to a local press club in Peshawar to protest the school closings, and she gave her first speech—“How Dare the Taliban Take Away My Basic Right to Education?”

Reasoning (connecting E to C): The Taliban took away women's rights and education in Pakistan and made it to where Pakistan followed to same laws as …show more content…

She was in critical damage but managed to survive with no brain damage luckily. Malala took a stand on her opinion even though she almost died for it.

Evidence (direct quote): “Dear friends, on the 9th of October, 2012, the Taliban shot me on the left side of my forehead. They shot my friends too. They thought that the bullets would silence us, but they failed,”said Malala Yousafzai.

Reasoning (connecting E to C): The Taliban took responsibility for the attempt on her life. She survived the attack and was flown from Peshawar to Birmingham, England, for surgery. The incident elicited protests, and her cause was taken up around the world.

Evidence (paraphrase): On October 9, 2012, Malala was shot in the head by a Taliban gunman while she was on the way home on her school bus from school. When the gunman shot, he targeted the left side of her head and sank down her neck. She was shot because she stood up that all women would be equal and the Taliban disagreed. The shooting went into critical condition and portion of her skulled was removed to treat her swelling brain, yet she suffered no brain damage and still had hope to keep on standing up for her

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