A former cop gets entangled with the murder of the Mayor and the Mayor’s secretary. STORY COMMENTS PREY presents as a mystery thriller. The opening with the murder of the Mayor sets the tone. It’s a gruesome, violent world. However, what really captures the interest of the audience is the mysterious woman who leaves her raincoat and a package with the protagonist, Jude Stevens. The idea that the woman disappears is a smart story choice. Good anticipation is created. The audience wants to know more. An even smart story choice is when the Mayor’s secretary ends up dead and she turns out to be the mysterious woman. Now the audience is even more engaged. The goal appears to be clear: catch a killer and the stakes are high. However, as much as these …show more content…
Consider cutting the idea of watching the intruder remove a glove, run a finger over the blade, slice the finger, and lick the blood. This is something that slows the pace and it feels familiar. Trim a lot of the detectives/coroner/Deputy Mayor scenes to enhance the pace. Get in and out of a scene quick; the rule is to come into a scene late and to leave the scene early. Consider after the woman leaves her raincoat and package that Jude goes looking for her and that he actually sees the men taking her away. He could go after the men, get beaten, or he could go after them and lose them. This gives the script more action, elevates the suspense and tension, as well as it puts the focus more on Jude. The other concern is the flashback of his backstory about his partner. Consider if this is necessary. He already has a compelling backstory about his wife having cancer. He has PTSD. Explore if it’s necessary to have a second backstory. Regardless, it would be best not to have a flashback about how his partner is killed. This stops the main storyline. If this backstory is relevant just reveal it verbally, so as not to hinder the pace. Remember, keep the focus on
The Killer at Thurston High, discussed a teenager named Kip who experienced psychological, emotional, and peer stress in early childhood. Violent and disturbing outburst was often a result of his actions, causing catastrophic traumas to his community and family. The film goes into depth explaining the relationship of Kip’s immediate family and his individual characteristics. The Kinkel family was well known, sophisticated and quite until violence struck.
Forensics has changed the way our criminal system works now. A lot of cases are being solved because of the development of forensics. Even cold cases are being brought up to the light to be investigated again and a good percentage of the cases are being solved and criminals are being brought to justice. The green river killer is one case that really got me intrigued into forensics and I got mesmerized by the techniques that are being used to catch murderers and other crimes being committed. The green river killer had an interesting childhood that led him to be a serial killer. He committed multiple murders on prostitutes and left there families with agony and pain. But advances in DNA ultimately led to his demise, police officers were able
The film “Murder on a Sunday Morning” is a documentary on the murder of Mary Ann Stephens. This murder took place on May 7, 2000, in Jacksonville, Florida. Mary Anne Stephens was at the Ramada hotel with her husband when a dark male wearing a dark shirt, shorts, and a flat brim hat approached her and demanded for her purse. Within 5 seconds she was shot in the face by the bridge of her nose and killed. It was later that day hat Brenton Butler was stopped by police and identified by husband of Mary Anne Stephens. Brenton Butler was taken into custody where he remained for the next six months facing charges of murder in the first degree and armed robbery. Through evidence such as the clothes Brenton was wearing on the day of the murder, an alibi of going to blockbuster to hand in an application, and lack of forensic testing, Brenton was found not guilty in the case of Florida v. Brenton Leonard Butler after the jury convened for forty-five minutes on the twenty-first of November in 2000. The Jacksonville grand jury also decided not to file criminal charged against the three officers. After the case on March 12, 2001 the forensics department retrieved the purse to process all parts of it to find fingerprints matching to Juan Curtis who admitted to shooting Mary Ann Stephens. The Butler family planed to sue the sheriffs officers in an $8.5 million civil rights lawsuit.
While this popular economic history will most appeal to readers with an interest in Wyoming, it raises the broader question of how our interpretation of the past influences current policy decisions.
Peter Moskos‘, Cop in The Hood, is the story of a sociologist going native by going through the Baltimore police academy, becoming a cop and working for over a year. The book follows Moskos chronological journey, from the academy to the street and the last part of the book is dedicated to a pretty thorough analysis of the War on Drugs.
During the past couple months a controversial case was brought to the grand jury in Ferguson. The jury decided to not indict Officer Darren Wilson, who shot Michael Brown. This major decision caused uprising, riots, protests, and lootings in the town of Ferguson. Many protesters feel this is a race issue, when clearly it is not. The grand jury did the right thing to not indict Officer Darren Wilson in the killing of Michael Brown. Michael Brown was guilty because he assaulted a police officer, the actions Michael Brown took apart in, and
Jude started to lighten up more and enjoy life. He got a job, met and fell in love with Becka. Becka introduced her friend, Daphne, to Jude’s best friend, Corey. Corey has stood beside Jude through everything
The movie Guilty by Suspicion was not your average “action-packed” Matrix. In this movie, David Merrill (played by Robert DeNiro,) is a successful director. Everything seems to be fine, until his past starts catching up with him. Now he’s wanted for possibly being a Communist. As boring as this would sound to the average teenager, I actually liked it. Take for example the scene where he first sees his son. He gave him a brand new toy car and you could clearly see he loved his little boy. I liked this scene because it showed Mr. Merrill was a considerate and caring person…not a cold, raging beast. In another part of the movie when his friend Red had a sort of
(190) Jude begins to resent her mother and thinks that the supernatural things that happen to her might be her mother’s spirit angry for causing her death by having sex. Since her mother is dead and can’t explain her real feelings they get pushed farther apart. For this reason, this relationship changes for the better went Jude learns the truth about her mother.
This movie begins by depicting a bright articulate young lawyer named Andrew Beckett at work. Then the scene rapidly changes to Andrew at an AIDS clinic. You know at this point that Andrew Beckett has AIDS and a horrifying future as you see scenes of men with hollow expressions, open sores and skeleton-like features. It becomes obvious that Andrew was not telling his boss or coworkers that he has AIDS. Later we discover that he concealed this disease because he was afraid of being fired and people’s fear of him as a sick gay man.
Ash was getting in the investigation, he was finding out stuff too quickly and people are starting to die from finding new things out. The first scene that happened was a group of drug leader somehow had control of a police vehicle. The police breached the house arrested the people and got their vehicle back. Then there was a case where a room filled with blood everywhere, but there was no body to be found, and there was a scene where a man shot a police officer defending his own house. This is all Ash new until one day Ash found an attorney member dead hanging from a bridge over water. After that case Ash stayed around for a bit when a few guys came out of nowhere and started to beat him up with potatoes and they disarmed him. After the fight the guys left Ash on the floor and a girl came by and help Ash find his way too his car and get back home to his
One must never judge or discriminate a person based on their physical attributes. Prejudice and discrimination directed against someone of a different race is known as racism. It is evident in the movie “Crash” directed by Paul Haggis, that people misconceive others due to judgement on their physical traits. Throughout the movie, the characters living in Los Angeles face the challenges of fitting in a town populated by people of different colours. The offenders are the “white” people whereas the victims are everyone else. The presence of racism is the main cause of every conflict that occurs in the movie.
A very popular 1995 film involving crime is “Bad Boys” directed by Michael Bay. Michael Bay and his team of writers were able to film a highly intense action-comedy based around two detectives fighting organized crime. By examining distortions, crime causation theories, and the image portrayed in “Bad Boys,” the viewer is absorbed into the Hollywood perspective of our justice system.
After watching the movie “Citizen Kane” I realized why this movie was named one of the best films ever. Yellow journalism was in an era from the 1880 to the 1900 and it featured flashy journalism of that time, which made editors write about invented stories. Which went to big headlines on subjects that weren’t true. The two big writers of that time were William Randolph Hearst and Joseph Pulitzer. During the film Kane is depicted as a yellow journalism at different times.
New York City that is depicted in Taxi Driver seems to be too real to be true. It is a place where violence runs rampant, drugs are cheap, and sex is easy. This world may be all too familiar to many that live in major metropolitan areas. But, in the film there is something interesting, and vibrant about the streets that Travis Bickle drives alone, despite the amount of danger and turmoil that overshadows everything in the nights of the city. In the film “Taxi Driver” director Martin Scorsese and writer Paul Schrader find and express a trial that many people face, the search for belonging and acceptance.