Neutral Tones by Thomas Hardy (1867)
Neutral Tones
BY THOMAS HARDY
We stood by a pond that winter day,
And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
And a few leaves lay on the starving sod; – They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.
Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove
Over tedious riddles of years ago;
And some words played between us to and fro On which lost the more by our love.
The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing
Alive enough to have strength to die;
And a grin of bitterness swept thereby Like an ominous bird a-wing….
Since then, keen lessons that love deceives,
And wrings with wrong, have shaped to me
Your face, and the God curst sun, and a tree,
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The lover’s eyes looking at the poet “were as eyes that rove”. The comparison raised in the use of the word “as” add to the idea that the lover has left in spirit and wandered away. The word “rove” adds movement to the scene leading into an enjambment between the first and second line. This reveals that the wandering of the lover is an internal one, one of remembrance concerned with “tedious riddles of years ago”. The past is strongly brought into the scene in this line with its emphasis on “years ago” which is created through the use of the semi-colon placed just after these words. The riddles themselves are “tedious” which seems to imply they no longer hold their appeal, have become monotonous because they are long known and understood, no longer difficult to understand they are now merely objects of the over’s distanced inspection. This distance and lack of meaning is furthered in the lines “And some words played between us to and fro/ / On which lost the more by our love”. The words are useless and empty, they merely play like a ball game “to and fro”. All meaning has become lost between the lovers, and in the last line this meaninglessness has been made worse because of the love that they once shared. In this is the tragedy of a love that has died.
Within the third stanza this tragedy and death is made even more apparent through the description of the lover’s smile:
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When a loved one dies, one usually displaces his/her love on an object that reminds him/her of the beloved in order to allay anxiety in the face of sexual impulses. In the text, the narrator is reminded of his lover by the large mirror when he states, “I felt
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In the first stanza, the writer uses many techniques to convey the feeling of loss, when he says,
The speaker uses words such as “louring” (line 2), “deep deceit” (line 8), “grievous” (line 11) and “bale” (line 140. All of these words have sorrowful and despairing meanings to them which gives the whole poem an unhappy tone. The third and fourth lines discus that the speaker cannot even look at the beautiful face, which appears to grow more attractive daily, of the woman he loves. Moreover, the couplet tells the readers that the sorrow in the speaker’s eyes is there because of the pain he has felt due to his faulty relationship. The mouse that “lies aloof for fear of more mishap” (line 7) shows the misery felt by the speaker by using the words “aloof” and “mishap”. “Aloof” means to be stand-offish or reserved, which the speaker is because if he gets too close, he will be hurt again. “Mishap” means disaster or unfortune which altogether sounds miserable. Had the speaker used diction that was lighter or less depressed, the reader truly would not understand the misery the speaker has went through. The miserable diction depicts the deep wounds the speaker received from his love, shedding light to how much he really loved her and how bad she really hurt
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This is supported through his grievous diction throughout the poem. Through words like “loving”, Gascoigne uses his word choice to craft physical descriptions of the grief created in the man. The reader is able to create a picture in their mind of a male holding his head low due to his misery. This allows the reader to understand the ways in which gloom affects his outward appearance in society. Additionally, the usage of “grievous” in describing the game of love represents the outlook he’s developed due to the emotional damage caused by broken relationships full of lies and mistakes. He has learned that following the sudden attraction towards a woman, the process of forming and maintaining a healthy relationship is a hard process without much sense. Lastly, another example of these melancholy-associated words is “bale” in the final line. The captivating eyes of the woman are representative of his initial attraction physically towards the female, but now looking into them leads to feelings of despair and misery. Through these words (“loving”, “grievous”, and “bale”), Gascoigne has represented the emotional sadness and misery due to a broken relationship and established a mournful tone to accompany the previously addressed lesson learned from being hurt from
The attitude of heartbreak and betrayal of the speaker caused by the woman is used to contrast the connotations of the words chosen to build on the irony. He describes the situation as "trustless"(6) and "grievous"(11) due to the anguish this woman causes. The speaker employs such words to make clear the influence that she has over his emotional state. The undertone of the poem, created by rhetoric, is pessimistic as well as resentful which contributes to the speaker's attitude towards the woman. The negative emotions of the how he feels contrasts to the emotions that this woman causes by describing "the gleams which on your face do grow" (4) and her "blazing eyes"(14). Through the use of positively connotated rhetoric when describing the physical beauty of the woman, the attitude of the speaker is established to indicate his conflicting mental state. The speaker creates images through the use of emotionally charged words to compare himself and how he feels about the woman to visual images of his
In stanza four the pronoun “you” is introduce. We assume its Collin prior relationship, as its only stanza that doesn’t contains Collin pet analogy and first evidence contributing to the theme. The metaphor shift to abstract when Collin deny her worthiness and what she meant to his life. But, as he subtracted himself to the “combination”, he was able to discover her value rather measuring his spouse love and intimacy. Repetitions occur, such as “awkward and bewildering” to represent the time when his spouse was companion to him, but he couldn’t reciprocate those same nurturing feelings back to her. In addition, his spouse “held” him more than he ever did. He regrets it now when he is holding his dog but the dog is incapable to measure that same actions and words because of law of nature. The last stanza line, “..now we are both lost in strange and distant neighborhood.”, is another metaphor reference the way a lost dog might feel to his lost love that can’t ever be the same
The shift is also a reason for the theme in this poem. It goes from admiring the father in the photo, to being hurt by her mother’s emotions in the family. In the beginning, it quotes, “He looks like Errol Flynn” (Stanza 1), which was a very famous man at that time. A lot of men wanted to be him and women wanting to be with him. Therefore, he was a player. This shows that she thought very highly of her father. Also foreshadowing he is a player like Errol Flynn. But as the poem goes on, it starts to shift to talking about her mother. The first thing she said about her mother is that “She is not crying,” (Stanza 2), which shows that she significantly remembers her mother crying in her childhood, but has to explain that she is not in this moment.
The structure and tone of the poem enhance the conflict and hopelessness the speaker is feeling towards the woman he loves and desires. For the first twelve lines of the poem there is an “abab” rhyming pattern. This ties into the despairing and desirable tone and how the rhyming scheme can be an example of the speaker constantly going back and forth between emotions for this women. For example, “And that mine eyes take no delight to range About the gleams which on your face do grow.” (Gascoigne 3-4) are two phrases that contradict the speakers feelings. Stating that his eyes take no delight in range can refer to the speaker finding no use or happiness in looking at the woman. Although, he then mentions the gleams upon her face growing, giving the audience the idea that even though the speakers love for the woman causes him deep despair, he still desires her enough to describe her features in attentive detail; in this example the gleams on her face. This shows the back and forth pattern and the speakers struggle when it comes
Consequently, this picturesque poetic device helped communicate the theme of lost love by helping the reader associate the personas’ thoughts and beliefs with their own.
My first and immediate explanation for the poem was an address from one lover to a