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Personal Narrative Analysis

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The hardest part when editing and revising is not anticipating what you wrote. I had gone through the letter several times and was satisfied with the flow and my points. Once I got feedback I could look at the letter as if I had not wrote it. I saw exactly how the feedback comments applied to my letter. I’m starting to understand that one of my biggest weakness is that I assume everyone can see how I got to my point. But I never actually get the true point out. It is always embedded in my embellishments. Early in my writing career I realized I was to direct, I just stated the point but never show how I got there. Now it seems like I’m the reverse. I inform the reader how I got there and never state the thesis; in my revision my thesis

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