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Personal Narrative Essay: Basketball Starters

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Basketball Starters

One day in Gym class there were four boys playing basketball, there names were Jimmy who is very small and never gets to play for the basketball team. Then there's Carl who is a starter for the basketball team and is trying to convince coach to put Jimmy in, and finally there's Jeff and Charlie, they both like to bully Jimmy because he’s too small to play.

First, The story starts off in the gym while the team is having their first practice back.
“Hey what's up Jimmy,” says Carl.

“Oh hey Carl, do you think your gonna make the team this year.” “Well I think so, I mean I don't want to be to confident, but yeah.” Carl responds.

“Ok guys, Let’s start stretching.” Coach replies.

After practice Carl and Jimmy walked back to their …show more content…

Charlie bubbled “Yeah that would be perfect!”

The whole rest of the practice Charlie was making fun of Jimmy because he’s bad at Basketball and he can't make a shot. Finally, its game day, where the Wildcats face the undefeated Bobcats, The wildcats are warming up and getting ready for the game.

GAMETIME!!! Carl gets the tip off and passes it to Charlie then he drives the hoop and makes the basket and gets fouled. he makes his free throw. Later in the day it was halftime and the game was tied. The coach was very happy how they're playing against the Bobcats. Then, it's in the fourth quarter and the game is getting tight and Jimmy is the only person the team that hasn’t played yet.
Carl keeps asking coach to put Jimmy in but he won't budge, Finally coach puts Jimmy with two minutes left. Jimmy hasn’t done anything so far. There are 5 seconds left and Carl passes the ball to Jimmy. Now there are 2 seconds left, The game is tied. Jimmy shoots the ball and makes it into the hoop to win the game against the undefeated

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