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Personal Narrative Essay: Chicago's Monster House

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It was a beautiful night in Chicago. The moon was showering the city with its magnificent light, and the city was booming with noise due to the special event the local movie theaters were holding. The movie theaters were holding a free movie night for some of the top movies of the year 2006. Along with that, they claimed for every person who came, they would donate 50 cents to a local business. Me and my best friend, Zee, slash partner in the detective agency squirmed through the crowd trying to reach the door to our favorite movie of the year “ Monster House”. Even though we both knew that it wasn’t meant for adults we still enjoyed the plot and some of the thrills. As we neared towards the door, we noticed that the crowd had stopped moving and a high pitched scream cut through the air. Me and Zee instantly fought our way through the crowd trying to reach the distressed cry. When we arrived my eyes took a serious tone as I told everyone to evacuate …show more content…

Searching through the wallet, I found a driver's license, a key to an office and an unusual white, laminated card with a three digit code and a name after it. “Lori Trembath, age 40” I read aloud as I put the laminated card in my pocket. Taking the key I brought it closer to the ceiling light. I scanned along the front and back of the key looking for any sign what it is used for. Grinning, I looked at Zee and waved the key in front of him as if I was taunting him with a candy bar. “It looks like we got a possible lead Zee...it's an office key to Lori Trembath’s Family Dentistry,” I said with a smile. Before we arrived to the dentistry we stopped at our place to grab our uniforms and some snacks. Along with that, we made sure to give the chief a call and tell him that we had a possible lead. It was still the middle of the night when we arrived to the victim's workplace. Shutting the car door, we stared ahead at the building in front of

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