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Personal Narrative: My Strengths In My Writing

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Over the year I have made a tremendous amount of progress as a writer. I have improved my grammar and reduced the amount of run-on sentences in my writings. Throughout the year my writings have made a lot of improvement and my grades throughout the year reflect this well. In the beginning of the year my writings were very choppy or unorganized and didn’t flow very well but now they have structure and are very detailed. I have gone from getting an h5 on my first writing to a h8-9. This year, I have learned to make corrections, do extra research, and take time on my writings or essays. My writings this year show my strengths, weaknesses, growth and made me set goals for next year.
Strengths
The strengths in my writings have stayed consistent throughout the year. One major strength in my writings is my use of detail. I sometimes tend to over explain things but I have gotten very good at taking things that repeat out of my writings, which makes my writings very detailed. Another strength in my writings is my correct use of commas. When I was in elementary school I commas were my favorite type of punctuation and I used to put them everywhere in my writings but now I have learned how to actually use them. One of the last strengths I have in my …show more content…

Out of habit I always add in too much information then I take out the parts that I repeat a lot and it makes my writings sound more mature. When other people read my writings they are able to feel the same way I did at that time or whoever my writing is about. A great example of where I was very detailed is my memoir as a whole. “As time passed, it became harder to do things with friends, and I was becoming more lonely. I wanted to start seeing new people, but I didn’t know how to start.” (5). In this quote from my memoir I am detailed in the way she feels and it makes you feel as though you are as lonely as

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