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Reflection About Racism

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When I was planning this poem, I knew I wanted to write about a societal issue, but I wanted to challenge myself to create a story of an experience separate from my own. Coincidentally, I was inspired by current events, and, recently, a common theme is racism. Racism is something that I am wholeheartedly against, and I had always thought about. In the past few years, police brutality has become prominent, so I wanted to expose it for what it is, racism and oppression, not heroic self-defense, as some claim. Therefore, I chose the name Tamir for my speaker/ main character. This was based off a victim of this type of violence, Tamir Rice. Tamir Rice was a twelve-year-old boy, shot by two, never convicted, police officers, in 2014. I chose his name for Tamir King because I wanted this sense of innocence to be carried over, a sense which is particularly strong in a child. Correspondingly, the last name King comes from MLK Jr. Here, I wanted to create a parallel, a connection, between two individuals who were both killed by racial violence, but serve as cries for equality and calls for a better, more righteous, society. Additionally, MLK Jr. was also a massive advocate for nonviolent protest, which is what Tamir King is referencing in the last few lines about refusing to sink, to force specifically, but rising instead. I wrote the entire poem in apostrophe, second person addressing the police officer, even though he isn’t really there since Tamir is speaking from the grave. I chose this route because I wanted Tamir to talk to the person who killed him. Tamir is not above him, he just wants to level with him and point out his misconceptions. Tamir specifically addresses this toward the end of the poem saying “But we are equal.” I added this line because it takes away some of the blame and boils down an act of violence towards a final revelation that we are all human, we make mistakes and judgments, but we can be better. Again, the last line supports this. Prior to the “Still we rise” line, I have Tamir using “I” as a subject, but the last line is we because it includes the police officer. The police officer is on the surface level, someone who killed a black man, but he is on a deeper level, representing people

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