I am not a scrupulous writer, but I like to be a scrupulous writer. It is important to avoid choosing wrong words, focus on the essay length and keep the reader’s interest. I am improving my essay writing skill daily. I see fewer mistakes compared to previous essays. If I will be a scrupulous writer then I will improve my writing skills faster than now. It is not easy to be a perfect essay writer. However, Orwell's essay "Politics and English Language" gives me new information about essay writing that helps me write a perfect essay. His six questions show me a new way to improve my thinking capability. Orwell could add "Is this useful topic for a reader’s?" question in his list. A careful writer should need to follow Orwell's question, however, …show more content…
My thesis statement is using the cell phone should be banned while driving. I show three reasons that help a reader to understand my argument. I also try to convince a reader to think about how dangerous it can be if someone uses the cell phone while driving. I use some citations that help readers to think more closely about my argument.
What words will express it? "Should" is a commonly used word in my essay which makes my argument stronger. I do not use any vague words that are difficult to understand for a reader. I start all body paragraphs in order. For example, I clearify my thought at the first body paragraph by using main cause and effect. I use some transition words which are "on the other hand,” "however,” "even though,” and so on. Those help the reader to understand what I want to express in the essay.
What image or idiom will make it clear? In the second body paragraph, I use an example that helps a reader to make a connection with the cold calling essay. According to AT&T, "7-in-10 people engage in Smartphone activities while driving." A reader can use imagination easily with my detailed description. Detail description helps the reader to visualize the actual scenario. Most people, who drive regularly, often use the cell phone while driving; therefore, they have personal experience about the
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My cause and effect essay helps a reader to understand the reasons why they should avoid using the cell phone while driving. I compare some of the advantages and disadvantages of cell phones while driving. My comparison clearly shows that how useful this topis for the reader's.
In conclusion, my essay was not poorly written after analysis it. I have some sentence arrangement problems, and I should write short sentences along with long sentences. Orwell's sixth question gives me a nice direction to write a standard essay. Those questions also help me to write a more specific essay. If anyone wants to write an error-free essay, then he/she needs to follow Orwell's questions.
Work Cited
AT&T Inc."Smartphone Use While Driving Grows Beyond Texting to Social Media, Web Surfing, Selfies, Video Chatting", prnewswire.com, May19th 2015. http://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/smartphone-use-while-driving-grows-beyond-texting--to-social-media-web-surfing-selfies-video-chatting-300085207.html. Accessed date May 11th
George Orwell is an amazing writer of the 20th century who is famous for his short stories and poems. In many of his essays, he seeks to entertain and educate the audience about a particular aspect of society. Among his best works include “Politics and the English Language” and “Shooting an Elephant”. These two stories are written very meticulously in order to show the audience how easily we as humans tend to change the things we say, along with our behavior due to others influence on us. The two essays share some similarities when it comes to their writing style, but differ greatly when it comes to their tone.
Thesis Statement: All of us have driven a vehicle before are and based on my survey results almost all of you have been distracted while driving, if not texted before. Today, we will learn about some of the outcomes of texting then we will discuss some of the solutions to permit these outcomes from happening.
Orwell has a critical, and didactical tone in his essay. He is criticizing the “modern” style of writing in which authors use overly complicated sentences and pretentious words and jargon to sound intelligent or like they know what they are talking out. He also tries to teach the reader how to avoid such mistakes in order to write clear and effective English, as well as how to identify when a politician is trying to manipulate language.
Due to George Orwell’s many successful works, he has remained a recognizable and respected author from his first moments of fame until now. Orwell’s novels and essays touch on aspects of government and human nature that will always remain relevant. With America’s changing values and controversial times, Orwell’s warning seem more relevant than ever and prove that with strong ideas, a novel can remain current beyond lifetimes.
This piece is completely full of examples; using examples in a couple different ways. First Orwell starts off his essay by using examples to show how why Orwell thinks writing quality is lacking. He takes things like “meaningless words” and explains what they are. He uses these examples to give as much
Automobile crashes as a result of texting while driving is an epidemic that has taken over the nation in the past years. In today’s society, people have become more and more dependent on technology as everyday uses. How many can honestly say that they have text and driven? How many have had to swerve, stop on the brakes or almost gotten into an accident because of it? Texting while driving is the most common thing that almost everyone has done or seen. The main issue and threat is that people think they can safely type on their phone while driving; while others simply do not think there is any real danger with that act. Today, it is all about convenience; but the cost for this convenience can be very deadly. Studies show that any
In this age of multitasking, the use of cell phones is combined with assignments like cooking, driving, babysitting, walking, doing college assignments and even eating. Whereas the use of cell phones while doing some chores might be simply annoying, the consequence of using cell phone with driving can be fatal. Recent polls by the Pew Research Center and other researchers show that about fifty to ninety percent young Americans admit using their cell phone while driving. This includes about thirty six percent who said they texted or typed something whiles driving. (Lopresti-Goodman, Rivera, & Dressel, 2012). The practice of using phone particularly texting while driving has increased the number of distracted driving accidents. When the cell phone records of people involved
Writing an essay may seem like a huge obstacle to overcome, but with a plan of attack and a little organization, it can be easily completed. All it takes is seven easy steps.
1.Throughout the essay, Orwell talks about many of the problems in English language and how they all contribute to its downfall. One reason for its decline is the use of dying metaphors. A dying metaphor is one that has no impact on the reader, it has no meaning, and doesn’t enhance the readers experience. Another reason is the use of verbal false limbs and pretentious diction, which are used to make single words or short phrases into unnecessarily long and complex phrases in an attempt to sound smarter or more sophisticated. They also use words that are from Greek and Latin language. By bringing in another language into our own, we begin to break away from our origin of the English language. Next, meaningless words are also a problem
In other words, Orwell concludes "political language - and with variations, this is true of all political parties, from conservatives to anarchists is designed to make lies sound truthful and murder respectable, and to give an appearance of solidity to pure wind. "(9)To conclude Orwell primary objective is to create awareness on how to refrain from these writing habits and creates specific rules to avoid them and how to think as a writer
Therefore, we want to inform you about three deadly distractions found with cell phone use. One article (CDC et al., 2015), explains in simple terms, “There are three main types of distraction; visual, (taking your eyes off the road), manual, (taking your hands off the wheel), and cognitive, (taking your mind off of driving).” (para. 1). There are six variables with cell phone driving behaviors; all of which have a bleak end. According to researchers and predictors of distracted cell phone driving, Tian and Robinson (2016), “The data suggest that the attitude variable predicted intention to engage in all six distracted driving behaviors (reading and sending text message, making and answering cell phone calls, reading/viewing social media), and posting on social media while driving.” (para. 1). These behavior variables can lead to unsafe driving. Moreover, the law would be enforced on DWD violators.
Purpose Statement: I will inform my audience of the extreme dangers of using a cell phone while driving a motor vehicle. Thesis Statement: I hope to prevent my audience from using a cell phone while driving a motor vehicle with the information provided in this speech. Attention Getter: How many of you use a cell phone while driving or even worse text while driving? Imagine for minute you are driving, when unexpectedly you get a text.
The journal article elaborates on the major distraction technology presents to drivers. I understand the impact of texting while driving. I work for a large telecommunications company that invests a lot of money into don’t text and drive campaigns. The journal influenced my understanding of the issue by using statistics to show me the large impact that texting and using cell phones while driving have in the United States.
The popularity of Texting while driving has skyrocketed since 2000, mobile devices are the leading cause of distracting driving, in today’s society most young people main form of communication is texting through a cellphone and thus distracting them from focusing what’s important: being aware while driving. In general, when people
The thesis of the essay is that writing was Orwell’s inevitable and irresistible destiny, although shrouded by his attempts to abandon it. It had always been inexorably and intricately woven into his person, manifesting itself first at 5 or 6, and then ultimately impressing itself on his life with irrevocable and fulfilling finality.