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Scrupulous Writer

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I am not a scrupulous writer, but I like to be a scrupulous writer. It is important to avoid choosing wrong words, focus on the essay length and keep the reader’s interest. I am improving my essay writing skill daily. I see fewer mistakes compared to previous essays. If I will be a scrupulous writer then I will improve my writing skills faster than now. It is not easy to be a perfect essay writer. However, Orwell's essay "Politics and English Language" gives me new information about essay writing that helps me write a perfect essay. His six questions show me a new way to improve my thinking capability. Orwell could add "Is this useful topic for a reader’s?" question in his list. A careful writer should need to follow Orwell's question, however, …show more content…

My thesis statement is using the cell phone should be banned while driving. I show three reasons that help a reader to understand my argument. I also try to convince a reader to think about how dangerous it can be if someone uses the cell phone while driving. I use some citations that help readers to think more closely about my argument.

What words will express it? "Should" is a commonly used word in my essay which makes my argument stronger. I do not use any vague words that are difficult to understand for a reader. I start all body paragraphs in order. For example, I clearify my thought at the first body paragraph by using main cause and effect. I use some transition words which are "on the other hand,” "however,” "even though,” and so on. Those help the reader to understand what I want to express in the essay.

What image or idiom will make it clear? In the second body paragraph, I use an example that helps a reader to make a connection with the cold calling essay. According to AT&T, "7-in-10 people engage in Smartphone activities while driving." A reader can use imagination easily with my detailed description. Detail description helps the reader to visualize the actual scenario. Most people, who drive regularly, often use the cell phone while driving; therefore, they have personal experience about the …show more content…

My cause and effect essay helps a reader to understand the reasons why they should avoid using the cell phone while driving. I compare some of the advantages and disadvantages of cell phones while driving. My comparison clearly shows that how useful this topis for the reader's.

In conclusion, my essay was not poorly written after analysis it. I have some sentence arrangement problems, and I should write short sentences along with long sentences. Orwell's sixth question gives me a nice direction to write a standard essay. Those questions also help me to write a more specific essay. If anyone wants to write an error-free essay, then he/she needs to follow Orwell's questions.

Work Cited
AT&T Inc."Smartphone Use While Driving Grows Beyond Texting to Social Media, Web Surfing, Selfies, Video Chatting", prnewswire.com, May19th 2015. http://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/smartphone-use-while-driving-grows-beyond-texting--to-social-media-web-surfing-selfies-video-chatting-300085207.html. Accessed date May 11th

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