Shattered In The Floor Analysis

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A whole picture of suspense in less than 150 words! It left me hanging and bothered. From working in BPO industry in the past, receiving weird calls always came in package with normal ones. Had I experienced one like what happened in the story, I would probably be so affected. It's difficult feeling so helpless while sensing something tragic happening on the other line. Good job in successfully writing a fear stirring plot line.

I just noticed that in "broken glass shattered in the floor" appear a bit redundant with broken and shattered or a bit off since it made an impression to me that it was already broken before it shattered (again) on the floor. It's not a major point but just sharing my reading experience.

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