A whole picture of suspense in less than 150 words! It left me hanging and bothered. From working in BPO industry in the past, receiving weird calls always came in package with normal ones. Had I experienced one like what happened in the story, I would probably be so affected. It's difficult feeling so helpless while sensing something tragic happening on the other line. Good job in successfully writing a fear stirring plot line.
I just noticed that in "broken glass shattered in the floor" appear a bit redundant with broken and shattered or a bit off since it made an impression to me that it was already broken before it shattered (again) on the floor. It's not a major point but just sharing my reading experience.
It is 2:20 in the morning when the phone rings. You are automatically startled and jump to pick it up after the second ring. That feeling in your stomach tells you that something is terribly wrong. It is the police on the other end of the line telling you that your daughter has been in a fatal accident. As the officer is talking, you seem to freeze and zone out. Your spouse is up now and takes the phone and talks to the officer to find out what is going on. You are in a state of shock as you both drive to the hospital so that you all can identify your daughter. When you become more coherent, you learn that a senseless fool who was drunk took your precious baby away from you. This is one phone call
The words moved into her mind, like leaves on an autumn breeze. She awoke to find the phone between her cheek and the pillow, the insistent buzzing the only sound from the black receiver. Had there been a voice on the line? Or had she only dreamed it? Or was she even hallucinating? She had had dreams before, but the kind that would wake her like an alarm bell. Heart pounding, pulse racing, it would take her several moments to get her to know where she was and that she had been dreaming.
After the freaky deep voice, I gave them a silence response. Instantly I hung up with no idea who the guy is. I am under tree all alone standing in the middle of nowhere thinking I really want my mom now. Hoping I could ring her right now, I had no phone service. Seeing the alert made me wonder how I could answer the anonymous call? Something told me that there were some strange things happening.
When she woke up the next day, there was a piece of paper on her pillow. It had a phone number on it and a name, Walter Hamasaki. So, she called the number and someone answered. “Hello, this is Walter Hamasaki. Sorry I am busy at the moment please leave your name and number, and I’ll try to get back to you as soon as possible,” beep.
After the couple shook hands with dad and the real estate agent, they got into their minivan and drove away. I stood on top of the staircase and eavesdropped and felt like I had been punched in the stomach when I heard the news. I overheard that the couple was ready to move in as soon as possible because the wife was expecting a set of twins, plus they already had an older child. While dad showed his enthusiasm about getting rid of the house, I felt sick. Whenever the agent suggested to dad that we should start packing, I felt weak and went to lie down on my bed.
It was midday and I was sitting at my desk eating my lunch when I heard the phone ring. It was a very surprising matter that someone had called me at this time of day. I then rushed abruptly to the phone because I knew it must be urgent. My favorite news reporter Marc Hardy was on, so I decided to stop and listened.
Dispatchers received what they thought was a concerned call from a grandson trying to get help for his grandmother when the phone call began, things soon changed though.
Beep! Beep! Beep! Six in the morning on a Monday and people are already ringing my phone. In the process of reaching for my glasses on my nightstand, I knock over a glass of water. I quickly jump out of bed to catch the glass, but I just wasn’t quick enough. Shards of glass all over my bedroom rug, I knew I needed to roll out of bed and clean this mess up. Then I remember the continuously ringing phone that seemed to be ringing for the last five minutes. As I finally grab my phone, I look at the name on the screen and it read Sophia. Why in the world would my sister be calling me at six in the morning? This better be important, otherwise she’s certainly going to think twice before calling this early again. I answer the phone and call her name with frustration, but for a moment Sophia stood in silence. She finally responds and all she could say was that mother is in the emergency room at Riverside Hospital.
got a call that would change her life. A New York city building developer wanted to purchase the building from her. The four story building on Manhattan's east village that she inherited for free. Was now worth a ridiculous sum. The company wanted to knock down the building and build a brand new apartment build that was much larger. My
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They did not know what they were supposed to do until they suddenly heard the phone ring. The caller ID showed that it was
Louise Ogborn, an 18 year old churchgoing employee at Mcdonalds, became the suspect of a crime that was never committed. According to the man on the phone, “Officer Scott”, she had stolen a purse and needed to be strip searched. Summers, her manager, led her to the restaurants office and began the process, doing what the caller told her to step by step. Of course she claims that she asked him questions about why she had to do this, but he sounded like a legitimate police officer to her. After a few hours she told “Officer Scott” that she had to get back to the counter, and at his request she called her fiance. He forced her to perform sexual deeds at the callers command, and threatened to hit her if she refused. He was not the only one. Several cases were reported were the managers were so intent on doing as the caller asked that they even fought off the victim's family. However, finally Nix, summers fiance, had to leave and he called in the janitor. It was he who refused the callers demands and realized something was amiss. The result of this traumatic event affected everyone involved. Both Summers and Nix ended up in jail, and Ogborn was never the same. She began to suffer from panic attacks,nightmares, anxiety, and depression as a result. As Wolfson’s title suggest this was truly a hoax most cruel.
Could you believe an ordinary phone could be suspenseful? “sorry Wrong number” by Lucille Fletcher, and “sorry right number” by Stephen king. Both stories have a husband and wife. Both have to deal with a phone. Each of the stories have scary problems.
I never knew how much a telephone could ruin someone's life. Here are two great suspense plays , “Sorry, Right Number” By Stephen King, and “Sorry, Wrong Number” By Lucille Fletcher.Both of the plays center around a phone call that the characters hear.But neither of them could get a chance to know what the phone call meant.
It’s two o’clock in the morning and the telephone rings, startling the psychologist. Groggily, she answers not knowing who is on the other end. As the doctor listens carefully to the voice on the phone, she realizes that it is one that is all too familiar. It’s one her patients. This patient has been dealing with some depression issues and is ready to do something drastic. The psychologist talks calmly with the patient for several hours to calm the young lady down, all while helping her work through the steps to feel better again. In a situation such as this one, it was very useful and important for the patient to have the psychologist’s personal cell phone number.