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Stereotyping Ethnic Characters In Hollywood

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1. I like this because it has clear thesis statement, strong three supporting details, and reliable evidences. This essay is very effective that state his position strongly, “It is their social responsibility to avoid stereotyping ethnic characters because they are harming society by exploiting racial stereotypes, undermining ethnic groups, and the fact that they are very influential.” The writer express his opinion well in this essay, especially, I liked that he used the statistic facts to provide the evidence of how much Hollywood is influential to people. - Is there a clearly stated thesis in the introductory paragraph?
Yes, there are a clearly stated thesis in the introductory paragraph.
- Do all the supporting paragraphs back up the thesis?
Yes, all the supporting paragraphs back up the thesis. Your comments: The introductory paragraph has clear thesis, “Although some argue that Hollywood writers and directors don’t need to avoid ethnic racial stereotypes, it is their social responsibility to avoid stereotyping ethnic …show more content…

Yes, there is specific evidences in supporting paragraphs.
- Is there plenty of it? Yes, there is plenty of it. Your comments: The writer provides plenty of the specific evidences, such as a expertise’s quotes, Hollywood films, and statistic facts, to support his position that stereotyping ethnic characters in Hollywood film gives negative effects in society. For example, he gives an example, the famous movie “Rush Hour 2,” to show how the Hollywood is exploiting racial stereotype. Additionally, he also provides statistic facts of the selling tickets of Hollywood movies to prove how much Hollywood is influential to society. Base 3: Coherence
- Is there a clear method of organization? (List of items or a time order?)
Yes, there is a clear method of organization.
- Are transitions used to connect sentences and ideas? Yes, the writer is using the transitions to connect sentences and

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