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Summary Of Just Walk On By Brent Staples

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In Brent Staples’s essay “Just walk on by”, his message is that stereotypes forced by society combined with subconscious racism are hard on those who assume and those who are assumed upon. Staples uses emotion and persona to create and convey his message of subconscious racism and the difficulties that may arise from assuming traits because of appearances.
Staples uses fear to make the reader feel what he feels, what the people who assume feel, and creates a general atmosphere around the situations that he is forced into. If Staples would walk through any “dark, shadowy intersections in Chicago”, and if there were any cars stopped in front of that crosswalk, his presence would “elicit the thunk thunk thunk of the drivers [locking their doors]” - no matter their race or gender - as they frantically pound the …show more content…

He uses onomatopoeia to show the extent of other people’s fear when near him - even when in their cars. By showing what he hears while being on the other side of these people’s fear shows how it affects him, and how these people locking their doors makes him fearful too although not in the same way as the people inside of the car. The fear on both ends of this spectrum help the reader understand and feel as if they are in both situations, furthering the argument Staples makes to advance his message, consequently making it personal for the audience. Another way Staples advances his message with fear is when he starts his paper with “My first victim was a woman”. This description creates a tone that makes the reader want to ask questions, to read more and figure out who this guy is victimizing and why. Staples’ phrasing simultaneously pulls the reader into his essay, as well as begin

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