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Synthesis Of Sylvia

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So you are discussing the synthesis of Sylvia from the lesson Miss Moore taught? Your thesis to me was a little unclear, I see you asked a question at the end of the paragraph but I’m not sure where you as the author of the paper stand or where the paper is going. I think it would be best to answer this question before you move to your first body paragraph. I like how you explain to your audience what the Hegelian Dialect is, however in the first body paragraph it would be better to talk more about the story. But, you relate the character to the information very well. In the body of the essay there were no quotes to support your thesis or argument. I didn’t understand what side you were one until the conclusion of the essay. I think it would

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