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The Birthmark Imperfection

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In my adaptation paper, I decided to rewrite the short story, “The Birth-Mark” by Nathaniel Hawthorne, because I wanted to show how one imperfection can change everything in someone’s life. How could one birthmark drive someone to death? The idea of imperfection should not exist in an ideal perfect world, and never understanding someone’s ideas and words can damage a beautiful soul and mentality. The author, Nathaniel Hawthorne used his short story to show how a husband’s approval and beauty ideas were more important than showing his wife true acceptance of every beauty flaw. The only option in the husband’s eyes was the removal of the Crimson Hand birthmark, or as Aylmer sees the birthmark as “hideous” (Hawthorne, 419). Even though, the result …show more content…

In the rewrite, Georgiana commits suicide instead of been killed by Aylmer’s hands, and she feels like anyone will understand the fact that she never accepted the birthmark either. I omitted the scene of Georgiana dies by Aylmer because of the time change been modern day. How people handle bullying and unkind words is different than Hawthorne’s time because of today’s beauty morals are way different. Aylmer did not realize his words could take away a beautiful soul and best friend. Aylmer’s idea is still the focus in the rewrite like the original. In the rewrite, Aylmer comes up with the rumor by using the idea of the birthmark been a charm to get boys. I got the idea of the rumor by rereading, “The Birth-Mark”, when Georgiana explained to Aylmer and Aminadab about how she saw her birthmark, she explained the birthmark as a charm, she believed many people would see her birthmark as beautiful, and she commented, “To tell you the truth, it has been so often called a charm, that I was simply enough to imagine it might be so” (Hawthorne, 419). So, Aylmer misunderstood and twisted Georgiana’s words from the original work, and Aylmer saw the birthmark as a blemish, which took away Georgina’s true beauty. The birthmark saw as a bruise at first by Aylmer, but he used the birthmark to make his friend’s life a living nightmare. Imperfection was not accepted …show more content…

Many people saw the birthmark as a symbol dealing with religion or the meaning of the birthmark was way deeper actually understanding why Hawthorne used the birthmark. Today, the birthmark would be a beauty statement, and how beauty’s standards do change within time. Someone’s birthmark could change the standards, but who would be the one to step out of the darkness to make a powerful statement with the possibility of getting judged throughout the process. There would be too many people afraid of getting judged for imperfection to stand up for something positive because how the society believes what true beauty should be. In an article, The Fatal Hand: A Sign of Confusion in Hawthorne's the Birth-Mark by Steve Youra, helped explain how obsessed Aylmer got about finding out more about the birthmark, and how Georgiana saw herself with the birthmark. Aylmer cared more about the idea of perfection, but he fully did not understand perfection on exists in Heaven, not Earth. Youra saw Aylmer’s obsession as a distraction from his failures in life, and he commented, “Noting down every detail in his experimental log (A heightened flush of the cheek- a slight irregularity of breath- a breath- a quiver of the eyelid- a hardly perceptible tremor through frame), he ignores the significance of these observation, even as he

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