I am going to write a sequel to the short passage, “ The Man Who Was Almost A Man,” which was written by Richard Wright. I am going to start from the time where Dave received the pistol, to the time where he got in trouble. After buying the pistol, Dave walks around the fields with it, admiring the gun but too scared and unsure of how to fire it. He is very anxious about firing the gun. He waits until it’s dark and he’s sure everyone has already fallen asleep before going home, and he puts the gun underneath his pillow instead of giving it to his mother as he’d promised. Mrs. Saunders approaches him in the middle of the night and quietly asks for the gun, but Dave tells her that he stashed it outside and will give it to her in the morning. When he wakes up, Dave removes the gun and holds it in his hands, realizing that he now has the power to actually kill someone. He quietly gets out of bed and hides the pistol in his clothes. He then heads out to the fields where he works, and he accidentally runs into his boss, Mr. Hawkins. Mr. Hawkins knows this is very suspicious of Dave being out s early and Dave tells him he is just out trying to enjoy the nice breeze outside. Mr. Hawkins tells him to carry on, but deep down inside Mr. Hawkins knows something is wrong. Once Dave gets far away from where anybody can see him he finally gains the courage to actually pull the trigger. He doesn’t take the proper aim and is not even holding the gun the right way and he accidentally
The other sniper is situated on a building on the other side of the street as the Republican Sniper. On top of being shot at, an armored car, of the opposing side, drives up near the Republican sniper’s position. He believes that his position was given up by a local woman who was walking around. The Republican sniper must kill this woman or his life will be in jeopardy. The Republican sniper takes the shot, and kills the woman. However, even after killing the woman, the Republican Sniper is still being shot at. He has to shelter himself, so, making his way to the top floor of the building, he situates himself. The Republican sniper proceeds to have a shootout with the other unknown sniper. The Republican sniper needs a way to kill his opponent, so he devises an ingenious plan. He fakes his death by pretending to be shot in the head. The opposing sniper, thinking he had killed the Republican sniper, makes his way out of his hiding spot. This exposes him, and the Republican sniper has a clear shot. The Republican sniper takes the shot, and sees the body of his opponent falling to the ground. The Republican sniper then goes to examine the dead body of his opponent, and to his horrifying realization, discovers that the man he had just outwitted and killed, was really his brother.
Dave thinks he is almost a man because he buys himself a gun and by having this gun he thinks it will gain the other men's respect. He is tired of getting grief from the men he works with. He believes he will be transformed into a real man by having a gun, but he quickly realizes that it is only bringing him problems and more responsibility. Dave sees that he is not ready for adulthood because of the responsibilities and obligations that come with it. He wants the freedom that he is led to believe that adults have. I do not think that his actions are those of an adult because I think that his mind set is childish since he thinks that a gun is going to make him seem more like an adult and not a child anymore. There is a lot more that comes with being an adult than just having a gun. Guns are dangerous and should be used in the right way. I do not agree with his action of shooting Mr. Hawkins' mule and it could have seemed that he was striking against Mr. Hawkins. I think the reason that he thinks that a gun will make him a man is because he feels it is a quick way for him to become powerful and manly. He believes that having a gun in his hand will give him more control over
“He set the first trigger and was moving his finger to the hair trigger when he heard a noise behind him”(54).This quote shows how he had mentally changed because, before he refused to shoot a gun and now he still does not like to kill but he will do it if
In Richard Wright’s “The Man Who Was Almost a Man,” Dave finds himself throughout the course of the story. Throughout the story, Dave is constantly seeking the pleasure of obtaining and then eventually shooting a gun in order to be a man and find himself. However, Dave does not expect the consequences that are to follow the pursuit of pleasure. The moral of the story pertains to the role pleasure and its consequences have in development and finding oneself. The story narrates a common, but little talked about problem, that runs rampant in today’s society. In the story “The Man Who Was Almost a Man,” Richard Wright illustrates Dave’s development, or lack thereof, through the symbols of the gun, the train, and the mule.
With Dave feeling as if he is no longer a boy, he felt he deserved respect. Dave wanted the entire town to respect him but really yearned for it mostly from his parents. He worked hard in the fields and the money that he earned went to his mother. ?Ol? man Hawkins give yuh mah money yit?,? Dave said to his mother. He felt that since he did the work, then he should get the money, or at least some of it. After killing the mule in an accident, Dave also wanted to regain the respect of his boss and the other townspeople. They tormented him for his immaturity and he wanted badly to change his perception and earn his respect back. ? All the crowd was laughing now.? The townspeople were laughing at ?Dave right after he accidentally shot the mule. ?Dave really wanted to be treated like a man but it seemed as if it would never happen. ?Damn em all Nobody ever gave him anything. All he did was work. They treat me like a mule, n then they beat me.?
The next day he goes and asks Dr. Kahn for a raise. He was really nervous because Dr. Kahn was very mean. He got the raise and felt really good about himself now.
Andy and Linda Dufresne had an unhealthy marriage. One night, when their fights were worse than normal, Linda stormed out. Andy was distressed and in his anger he went to all the local bars to drown his problems. He followed them back to Glenn’s house and stopped in the driveway. Andy takes a gun out of his glove box and spills bullets out of the car when trying to load the revolver. He stumbles up to their house and hears them through the window. Andy stands in place for a while as he sobers over a bit. He leaves and drives away from the scene, throwing his gun over a bridge as he leaves.
Dave throws his morals aside and cons his mother out of the money by telling her that his father needs a gun in the house. This action shows how far Dave will go to obtain what he believes will make him a man. After buying the gun, he then begins his next
When the game was progressing and no one was landing on the bullet, Tigo got impatient and added more bullets. Tigo’s decision to add more bullets was also influenced by his group as he said ‘We’d better lower the odds. The boys won’t like it if we…’. This means that their groups wouldn’t like it if they both stayed alive and no one lost. Another instance where Tigo added more bullets into the gun is when Dave asked what he was doing and he said ‘The boys said…’ then ‘Yeah, I’m game’ in a low voice. The means that Tigo actually didn’t want to add the third bullet into the gun, but he was sort of forced by his group to do it. If their groups weren’t so insistent on someone taking the punishment, Dave would not be where he is now. This is a major part contributing to Dave’s death, however the groups did one more thing that was a factor to the
“The Man Who Was Almost a Man” is a short story by Richard Wright. In the story, Dave is a young man who wants to feel like a man, so he decides to get a gun. Everyone thinks Dave is still immature, but in his mindset the only way he will turn into a man is by owning a gun. His mother keeps his money from his work in the field and he manipulates his mother into giving him the money to buy the gun, he lies and says he will return the gun to his mother, then he goes to buy the gun and because he is still immature, he goes into the field and shoots the mule unintentionally, he goes and buries the gun in the field.
The Man Who Was Almost a Man, tells the story of a young seventeen year old teenager, named Dave Saunders, who finds himself struggling with the need to be taken seriously as an adult, while still being seen by his community, as merely a boy. Published in 1961 and written by Richard Wright, this short story focuses on the common struggle of young African American men in the South trying to find their identity outside of the box that the United States society put them in at the time. Dave felt that in order to prove that he was a man; in order to receive the respect he thought he deserved from Black and White Americans alike, he needed to purchase a gun. This, of course, proved to be of more harm than good, as Dave found himself incapable of using the gun correctly, and what resulted was the death of his employer’s mule. Dave then, after creating a nonsensical lie that does not convince anyone, decides to skip town in order to avoid the responsibility of taking up for his actions. When taking into consideration the story line and its relativity to the South during the 1920s, when the story is set, it’s clear to see that Dave Saunders’ story is more than what it seems to be on the surface. Dave Saunders’ story is a reflection of common coming-of-age struggles, and even more than that, the common African American struggle of trying to find power when everything surrounding you, and society as a whole, is telling you that you’re powerless; a struggle that is still very
In the gray light of dawn he held it loosely, feeling a sense of power. Could kill a man with a gun like this. Kill anybody, black or white. And if he were holding his gun in his hand, nobody could run over him; they would respect him"(Wright, 377). "Lawd, ef Ah had just one mo bullet Ah'd taka shot at tha house. Ah'd like t scare ol man Hawkins jusa little…Jusa enough t let im know Dave Saunders is a Man"(Wright383).
She then gets mad because her mother gets angry with her, and so she decides to go outside. Once outside she shoots up just to spite her mother,
When writing fiction, there are certain rules that authors need to follow in order to create good fiction. Good fiction would be one that follows these 3 rules: character’s behavior is consistent, character’s words and actions spring from motivation, and characters are plausible or lifelike. For a character to be lifelike or plausible it means that the character in the story is presented as someone who you could meet in the real world. In good fiction, the reader will be able to immerse themselves into the book so well that the reader will forget that they are even reading a story. An example of good fiction would be “The Man Who Was Almost a Man” by Richard Wright. Wright’s main character Dave possesses the three necessities that would
In addition, the reader sees that the man’s love for his son make him do anything to ensure the security and protection of his son. McCarthy writes, “He dove and grabbed the boy and rolled and came up holding him against his chest with the knife at his throat. The man had already dropped to the ground and he swung with him and leveled the pistol and fired from a two-handed position balanced on both knees at a distance of six feet. The man fell back instantly and lay with blood bubbling from the hole in his forehead” (66). The quote shows the reader that the man kills the gang member who has threatened the