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Tone Of The Prelude

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The Prelude: William Wordsworth’s The Prelude, written in blank verse is an autobiographical poem written from 1798 to 1799. Throughout the excerpt the speaker has changing responses to his experience and conveys his responses with varying diction, imagery, and tone style. There are three changes in the speaker's response to his surroundings, which portray his changing emotion throughout the piece. The transitions occur on lines 11, 24, and 34. Tones of adventure, decisiveness, obstruction, and darkness are used throughout the work. The speaker changes his tone during the transition from the first to second section. He starts in the first with an awe filled and adventurous tone. He then transitions to a tone of pride and decisiveness …show more content…

The change occurs at line 24a where a period and a capital letter is placed in the middle of the line. A previously unseen peak raises and disturbs the speaker in his prideful nature. He is rowing his newly found boat with apt skill, when suddenly something that he could not predict appears unexpectedly. His word choice demonstrates this change “ the horizon's bound, a huge peak, black and huge, as if with voluntary power instinct upreared its head”. The speaker uses the word huge twice within a span of 5 words (line 22) to emphasize the massiveness of this mountain. He felt as if he was on top of the world, but then it is yanked out from under him by an inanimate object. He then says “I struck and struck again, and growing still in stature the grim shape towered up between me and the stars,”. He uses this word choice to say that he had felt as if he had been growing in size every second of his journey, but as soon as he saw that mountain and its size, he stops growing. His imagery that the mountain is the “horizon's bound” and that it “towered up between me and the stars” shows that he understood that this mountain was the thing that would keep him from his goals and …show more content…

The speaker's tone goes from nervous and scared to dim and dark. The man has had to turn around and go back because of his fear for the humongous mountain that seemed to be encroaching upon his every move. The word choice of “and through the meadows homeward went, in grave and serious mood;” shows how he left his boat with a feeling of sadness, but had not yet been robbed of his joy. But, in the next section his starting word choice of “but after I had seen that spectacle, for many days, my brain worked with a dim and undetermined sense of unknown modes of being” shows that he doesn't even know how to feel anymore in light of recent events. This marks the change in him from sadness to dim apathy. His imagery of “there hung a darkness” and “no familiar shapes remained” parallels the complete emptiness he feels in his soul. The speaker once again refers back to the environment when he uses “no pleasant images of trees”, “of sea and sky”, and “no colours of green fields”. He uses this environmental imagery to show that his life is now devoid of all color. He closes this excerpt with “like living men, moved slowly through the mind by day, and were a trouble to my

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