Your first sentence resonated with me. I rewrote my bio , at least 6 times and still felt inadequate when I hit submit. Not to worry,” together”, we will learn how to write complex and compound sentences that will knock their socks off! (Not sure yet how to correctly type accreditation for direct quote)
I must say i did not find you writing mundane and found no grammatical errors! I loved how you told where you were born and how you are Canadian. Do you have any desire to travel to Pakistan?
Volunteering in the school valued! You heart leads you to help and give back. Thank you. Plus, it must be wonderful to get glimpse of your daughter growing in the classroom.
I will end with I’m still chuckling as I have an image and a clear sound of a spunky
Numerous people believe that they have the potential of being the next amazing heroine, but how do they start? Some uses violence, others create campaigns. But what is even more powerful than violence and campaigns? A voice, a voice that is willing to speak up for a change in the world. One that is not afraid of what would happen if they express how they feel for humanity. Qualities, like being selfless or having a clear set of values, are important, but the most crucial quality of that voice is having passion and the ability to inspire. Because of the passion that she had, Malala Yousafzai successfully achieved many great things such as gaining countless supporters on her crusade of children being able to attend school and being the World’s
The art of writing is a complex and difficult process. Proper writing requires careful planning, revision, and proofreading. Throughout the past semester, the quality of my writing has evolved significantly. At first, I struggled with the separation of different types of paragraphs, and I found writing them laborious. Constant practice, however, has eliminated many of my original difficulties, and helped to inspire confidence in my skills. As a collegiate writer, my strength lies in my clear understanding of the fundamentals of writing, while my primary weakness is proofreading my own work.
One of my first volunteering positions growing up was at a local elementary school assisting children in core math and reading subjects. Not only did I help the students but I also helped the teacher with grading and developing new assignments. This experience gave me great insight into how one can effectively explain education materials to young children.
e majority of the marriages in Afghanistan are still being forced till this day which sorrowful in my opinion. I don't think honor killings should occur in any country. I can’t believe the victim that is raped has to go to jail for something that she doesn't control. I found that very unfair and horrible to imagine. Afghanistan, in general, doesn't view women as actual women because it shows that they can take advantage of any female and the victim will get punished for it. It breaks my heart knowing that women are being treated so bad especially I was raised by women, so I tend to have a lot of emotions when it comes to women's rights which are being violated on a vast scale throughout the book. However, Azita came across and was one of the few women who was very brave of her because, In Afghanistan, a culture ruled almost entirely by men, so it's difficult for women to have a voice for
I spent my middle school years and early high school years helping out in Mrs. DiIanni’s 3rd grade classroom at Lee Elementary in Middleville. While helping Mrs. DiIanni with little things like filling and grading papers, I also helped the kids with problems they were working on. I had a lot of fun helping them with educational art projects and learn to write in cursive. I had also helped organize some of their holiday parties, and well as joined them in the festivities. I had done so many things with these kids and I hopeI at least impacted one of their lives.
In Randa Jarrar’s essay Why I can’t stand white belly dancers she bluntly addresses the predicament of cultural appropriation. Jarrar’s main purpose is to inform her audience on appropriation, whether it’s done oblivious or uncaring of the situation. There are many ways she presents the situation, the tone she takes on to convey the problem is unsympathetic and transparent.
A few areas that the writing specialist pointed out in which I need to review and refresh. 1. Fully
The guidelines that Redish puts forth in her book can definitely be shown throughout the article you reference from Bon Appétit. I especially liked how the author writes in a familiar language and uses popular references like that of Beyoncé or #obsessed. Redish writes, “[w]riting can have character and flavor and still be clear” (4062). It certainly goes a long way in making the piece of writing on whole more sociable and user-friendly. The author has clearly gone to the extra effort of matching her tone to what she perceives as the persona of the reader/user. Because of this, the article is a great intro piece to invite customers to explore more of the website or, like you mentioned, find the perfect 2017 cookbook. Likewise, Food52.com
This was a great experience I had and would love to do again in the community. I love working with kids and making their day. It’s always a great feeling knowing you helped a kid become better as a student or even as a person. I wished I had done this earlier because I had such a great time with my
Muslims in Australia proceeding Hanson’s ill-informed attacks on their value system have felt alienated and marginalised from Australia’s political system. When a social group in society is ostracised by the political sphere, the civic participation of that social group, in turn, becomes limited. Simply because they believe that the system has failed them (Bird & Mcdonell, 1997).
If you are raised to hate, is it possible to choose a different path? This is the question that Zak Ebrahim raises at the beginning of both his Ted Talk and his book, The Terrorist’s Son. Ebrahim’s story is one of choice, he chose nonviolence and peace.
For my third trimester service project, I provided help to my school. I went to daycare for two hours helping Mrs. Riley. I helped kindergarteners with their homework inside so that they wouldn’t have any homework to do when they got home. I also helped run a couple games and make sure everyone was making smart decisions on the playground. I then helped Ms. Maynes in the 5th grade classroom for two hours as well. I helped her with cleaning the students desks, I helped with correcting papers and putting them in numerical order, I finished coloring a Mary drawing to put on the bulletin board, and I also helped punch out some letters so she can use them in the classroom. Ms. Maynes was also kind enough to bring me down to the Kindergarten classroom
Although you’ve never asked for it, yet I find it possibly fruitful to you to have a brief feedback to sum my standpoint of you for the past 2 months, you can accept it as far as you see it constructive, that was planned to be visited by the end of your probation period by the way.
Twelve-year-old Kaz who lives in Afghanistan comes from an extremely poor family. Desperate and hungry, he joins the Taliban which promises him three meals a day. Soon after joining, Kaz’s commander ordered him to fire on a group women and children. Kaz protests the order, but is told he will face the same fate if he resists. Kaz takes part in the killing and is later prosecuted for war crimes.
1 And now there was no more contention in all the land of Zarahemla, among all the people who belonged to king Benjamin, so that king Benjamin had continual peace all the remainder of his days.