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Valley Forge Dbq Essay

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At times I feel overwhelmed, which leads to being very scared. Here at Valley Forge it is terrifying and very bad. The war took place in 1777 through 1778. There were victories at Trenton and Princeton. However, at the time the congress did not want to trust George Washington. People have families that are dying due to the war. There was no meat, which is terrible because meat has a lot of protein. The soldiers didn’t know that they would basically be tortured for independence from Britain. Poor ventilation in the huts was a big issue as well. Smoke was on their eyes and skin all the time too. I have decided to not re-enlist for three reasons which are: the terrible conditions, the poor health of the soldiers, and a lot of people are dying. …show more content…

One condition is that there is no meat, soldiers would say, “NO MEAT! NO MEAT!” when they began to run out of food (Waldo, 151). Lack of meat is a bad condition because there would be a lack of protein, which helps you stay strong. The lack of strength in soldiers is not good at all because it is a huge disadvantage. “My skin and eyes are almost spoiled with continual smoke.” (Waldo, 151). This is bad because having your eyes with smoke hurts and would feel terrible after hours of it happening. Your skin might even hurt from it too. This could ruin your eyesight which is important if you need to aim for a war. It is tough to walk around all day because the other soldiers, and I don’t have shoes, so we are barefoot most of the time (Powell, 149). If people don’t have shoes how are they going to run as they should in war. There is freezing snow everywhere also. My commander has told me that through December to June 1,800 to 2,500 soldiers died (Busch, 147). I did not like it when I heard this. One of those soldiers could have been me, or in the future I could die too. This reason is causing me not to re-enlist because I am scared and fearing death itself. I will not re-enlist due to the terrible …show more content…

“Poor food-hard lodging-vomit half my time…” (Waldo, 151). This shows that people are sick. People would be vomiting a lot due to the sickness. “The army which has been surprisingly healthy, now begins to grow sick from the continued fatigues they have suffered this campaign” (Waldo, 151). This even says that people are getting very sick from the conditions. It is also flu season as well, so people are getting smallpox and other illnesses too. Today our commander announced that 2898 people are sick here at valley forge (Busch, 147). It is amazing how so many soldiers here at Valley Forge are still alive after getting sick, and living in these bad conditions. The bad conditions lead to sickness, then the sickness leads to death. Now it’s June and my commander has finally told us that 1800 to 2500 people have died due to sickness or bad conditions (Busch, 147). Once again people have died from bad health or the worse conditions. I do not want to be one of the dead soldiers. I would rather die on the battlefield rather than die from sickness. This is causing me to not re-enlist because if I stayed I would have a high chance of dying. Bad health is bad, but there is worse than the

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