I am writing a critical analysis essay for my psych class based on “The story of an hour” All I need is tips on how to edit everything looking for punctuation issues, fragmented sentencing and overall structure issues. Maybe suggest how to extend my conclusion because I am at 2 3/4 pages and I need 3. oSaveign12V...LayoutX, XA AAReferencesAa2. AEnglish (United States)Po#3Mailings$4Rough Draft Henderson Hunter.docx - Recovered - Compatibility ModeView Tell me2↓¶ReviewThe dream of living her new fantasy has fallen to pieces in the blink of an eye. Chopinstates "Someone was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard whoentered" (2). Mrs. Mallard had been deceived and her new reality is face to face with her.%Chopin then states "He had been far from the scene of accident and did not even know therehad been one (2). Her sister is in clear disarray knowing what this ultimately means for Mrs.Mallard's future. Chopin states, "He stood amazed at Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quickmotion to screen him from the view of his wife" He had no clue of the new reality that wascreated without him. Not knowing the scope of the plans created in a life where he did notexist. Mallard was in complete and utter shock at the view she was looking at, leading her todeteriorate rapidly.Mrs. Mallards experiences a cyclone of emotions in "The Story of An Hour". SheShowcased her deepest desires to live an independent life away from the controlling societalexpectations held against married women at the turn of the 19th century. Her desires remainedunfulfilled whenever a series turn of events revealed that her husband was, in fact alive. In the -end, Mrs. Mallard unfortunately died of a heart attack due to the sight of her new reality. Herdreams were gone and lost; her heart gave out at this sight. This shows how intensely Mrs.Mallard's Husband repressed her thoughts and feelings; her heart would rather give out thanendure another minute without her liberty.5F| AaBbCcDdEeNormal6MacBook Pro➡AaBbCcDdEe Aa BbCcDc AaBbCcDdEe Aa BbNo SpacingHeading 1Heading 2&7000000*8(19FocusTitleF ReferencesA Aa ▾ PoAtnited States)•MailingsRough Draft Henderson Hunter.docxViewReviewEEE-Tell meAЯAaBbCcDdEeNormalCompatibility ModeAaBbCcDdEeNo SpacingMacBook ProAfter Mrs. Mallard hears this shocking news Chopin states "She did not hear the story asmany women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its significance" (1).Showing Mrs. Mallard as not just another woman but one with different desires and emotionalreasoning. Mrs. Mallard dealt with her reaction by abandoning the ship and running away toher room. She spent this time delving into her deepest thoughts and emotions recreating a lifeshe only dreamed of. Chopin uses many pieces of situational irony to explain Mallard'semotions creating a puzzle to piece together.AaBbCcDc AaBbCcDdE AaHeading 1Heading 2ETIMrs. Mallard experiences a significant internal modification, breaking free from societalexpectations and the constraints of being a married woman in the late 1800s. She had no signs ofregret for the intense emotions she was feeling. She notes, "A clear and exalted perceptionenabled her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial" (1), showcasing Mrs. Mallard's defiance of theconventional societal expectations brought upon her. Amidst adversity, she is moving past thesorrow of her husband's death and developing her new life of freedom. Chopin states, "Whenthe storm of grief had spent itself, she went away to her room alone" (1). There in her room,she sat pondering her new idea of freedom. Chopin says, "But she saw beyond that bittermoment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And sheopened and spread her arms out to them in welcome" (1). With a newfound sense of selfdespite societal pressure, Mrs. Mallard persevered.Finally, Mrs. Mallard gains enough courage to remove herself from her hideaway.000000Focus

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I am writing a critical analysis essay for my psych class based on “The story of an hour” All I need is tips on how to edit everything looking for punctuation issues, fragmented sentencing and overall structure issues. Maybe suggest how to extend my conclusion because I am at 2 3/4 pages and I need 3. oSaveign12V...LayoutX, XA AAReferencesAa2. AEnglish (United States)Po#3Mailings$4Rough Draft Henderson Hunter.docx - Recovered - Compatibility ModeView Tell me2↓¶ReviewThe dream of living her new fantasy has fallen to pieces in the blink of an eye. Chopinstates &#34;Someone was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard whoentered&#34; (2). Mrs. Mallard had been deceived and her new reality is face to face with her.%Chopin then states &#34;He had been far from the scene of accident and did not even know therehad been one (2). Her sister is in clear disarray knowing what this ultimately means for Mrs.Mallard's future. Chopin states, &#34;He stood amazed at Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quickmotion to screen him from the view of his wife&#34; He had no clue of the new reality that wascreated without him. Not knowing the scope of the plans created in a life where he did notexist. Mallard was in complete and utter shock at the view she was looking at, leading her todeteriorate rapidly.Mrs. Mallards experiences a cyclone of emotions in &#34;The Story of An Hour&#34;. SheShowcased her deepest desires to live an independent life away from the controlling societalexpectations held against married women at the turn of the 19th century. Her desires remainedunfulfilled whenever a series turn of events revealed that her husband was, in fact alive. In the -end, Mrs. Mallard unfortunately died of a heart attack due to the sight of her new reality. Herdreams were gone and lost; her heart gave out at this sight. This shows how intensely Mrs.Mallard's Husband repressed her thoughts and feelings; her heart would rather give out thanendure another minute without her liberty.5F| AaBbCcDdEeNormal6MacBook Pro➡AaBbCcDdEe Aa BbCcDc AaBbCcDdEe Aa BbNo SpacingHeading 1Heading 2&7000000*8(19FocusTitleF ReferencesA Aa ▾ PoAtnited States)•MailingsRough Draft Henderson Hunter.docxViewReviewEEE-Tell meAЯAaBbCcDdEeNormalCompatibility ModeAaBbCcDdEeNo SpacingMacBook ProAfter Mrs. Mallard hears this shocking news Chopin states &#34;She did not hear the story asmany women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its significance&#34; (1).Showing Mrs. Mallard as not just another woman but one with different desires and emotionalreasoning. Mrs. Mallard dealt with her reaction by abandoning the ship and running away toher room. She spent this time delving into her deepest thoughts and emotions recreating a lifeshe only dreamed of. Chopin uses many pieces of situational irony to explain Mallard'semotions creating a puzzle to piece together.AaBbCcDc AaBbCcDdE AaHeading 1Heading 2ETIMrs. Mallard experiences a significant internal modification, breaking free from societalexpectations and the constraints of being a married woman in the late 1800s. She had no signs ofregret for the intense emotions she was feeling. She notes, &#34;A clear and exalted perceptionenabled her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial&#34; (1), showcasing Mrs. Mallard's defiance of theconventional societal expectations brought upon her. Amidst adversity, she is moving past thesorrow of her husband's death and developing her new life of freedom. Chopin states, &#34;Whenthe storm of grief had spent itself, she went away to her room alone&#34; (1). There in her room,she sat pondering her new idea of freedom. Chopin says, &#34;But she saw beyond that bittermoment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And sheopened and spread her arms out to them in welcome&#34; (1). With a newfound sense of selfdespite societal pressure, Mrs. Mallard persevered.Finally, Mrs. Mallard gains enough courage to remove herself from her hideaway.000000Focus

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"The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin is a short story set in the late 19th century, exploring…