finest performance, for sure. The maid showed me to a deep-cushioned armchair angled to the fireplace. “Please be seated.” Out of place with the other furniture, the chair was none the less welcomed, comfortable, and reminiscent of my grandfather’s smoking chair. “My mistress will be with you soon, Mr. Gamboni. Refreshments will be served shortly.” As the plush chair enwrapped me, I reviewed what I had discovered about Mrs. Johnathan Winnaford III. Born Abigale Smythe, some 60 years ago this past
An unusually long wait until finally I got a ping on my Lyft app. I had started to question if the people in that city ever needed to go from one place to another. Taping the app to accept the call I started the eight-mile drive to the passenger’s address. There she was standing under a dark green perennial tree waiting for me! She was the only one in a deserted street and it looked as if no one beside her lived there. Half her face was covered with a bulky goggle, a hybrid of Sci Fi and ski goggles
The Doctor sauntered down the hall, smiling slightly to himself as he ran his fingers over the organic metal, and he searched for his room. When he finally found it, he pulled open the door and stepped inside. His living quarters were moderately large, the walls painted a deep TARDIS blue. His favorite color adorned the walls along with a few hanging pictures of Time Lord art, three dimensional pieces that could be entered and observed from the inside. In between the paintings were hand-painted
I found a hip hop album listed on the website “all my life for sale”, read through the description, after which I compared the description to one I had found on “ebay”. The description on “all my life for sale” was mostly written in a subjective tone with only very few objective styled sentences. To start the description the seller wrote ” Some say that this record is the birth of hip hop” afterwords the seller concluded the sentence by explaining how he had come to find the record. One sentence
that I chose was Space Checkers. In All My Life for Sale, the writer used subjective writing, as he talked about his how he felt about the game and his interpretation of how good or bad the game was. He said, “Another gift from Trey... I never played this crazy game.” This is showing subjective description as he is suggesting that the only reasons he had the game was because it was a gift. EBay used objective description since it only gave facts. The description of the item was, “Complete with all the
from “All My Life” and “EBay”, I noticed a few differences. First, the casual style with which the “All my Life” seller described their camera, versus the professional approach the Ebay seller took. Second, I noticed combination adjectives used in the “All My Life” review. The EBay reviews mostly consisted of objective descriptions of the items. Thirdly, while reading the EBay reviews I also noticed proper usage of “well” versus “good”. While reading the description posted by the “All My Life” writer
What type of description did you see: subjective, objective, or a combination of both? Provide examples. I picked “Stool from My Makeshift Workbench” at All My Life for Sale. I saw objective and combination. The example of objective was the writer elaborated on the he bought the stool, trying the purchase into a story why the writer bought that stool. For an example of combination, the writer combined his shipping chairs experience by telling how to send his ruby red chair around a month ago at the
an item strikes me as silly, yet somehow intriguing. All my Life offers a description of this item which paints a picture filled with adventure and the hope of images of exotic locations from the travels of John D Freyer. Contrast that to a very vague and bland description of a similar item on E-Bay, Lot of (50) Empty/Used 35mm Fuji Photographic Film Cassettes; hands down the offering on All my Life gets my bid. Objective descriptions, such as found on E-Bay are correct for the audience they
Mesmerizing beauty of the yard: Gazing out of my bedroom window one night, I witnessed a breathtaking view of the yard. As if you are transferred into a fairy tale. The sky seemed like a piece of beautiful painting. The whole ambiance of the space was captivating. The fluffy clouds were dancing around the moon making the light falling on the ground to glimmer dramatically. By the passing time the cloud shift shapes into something new and exciting each time. The stone pathway led one to the exquisite
The lively diner: The diner shop of the community is a cheerful place to be in. The magnificent front façade welcomes the rising sun, illuminating the whole space and bring it to life. The sun rays made the metal tables shine like a sliver. The soothing music played in the diner acts as a treat for the ears and a perfect start to a day. The people were captivated by the melodious tune and seem to sway in its rhythm. The smell of freshly baked bread attracts everyone passing by. The enthusiastic greeting